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Best Remedy (Septacore)

Updated on May 19, 2015
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Best Remedy


I can’t smash my head

Like what you did

Nor be overly theatrical

Over a dead general



I can’t be overly sweet

Prepare my best suite

And suddenly marry someone

And be off to Caribbean



I am so naïve

Those ideas I can’t conceive

I can’t even see

Beyond those concern for me



The only thing I can do

Is believe those words are true

And somehow wish

Trouble will be over in a swish



Yet what do you expect

I can never be a suspect

Of anything so you don’t circumspect

That I am but thinking of a subject



To punk you guys, viola

I’ve learned it from the master

Who is nothing but a great prankster

I hope everything is kinda



Have I allayed your worries?

That all your remedies

Do work for me

Still glad you let me be



Those feelings are also true

These days I’m feeling blue

Yet I don’t have the heart to leave you

My friends, the Great UFFCO…


Note...This poem was supposed to be published earlier but Hubpages denied it...This poem is dedicated to the friends i made on Facebook who helped me overcome those difficult moments of my life...






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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Why would this be denied? It's beautiful...Warm Wishes..

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      Ceri Naz 5 years ago

      you simply present tapestry of words and flow in the streams of inspiration. i love you

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      always exploring...thank you...yeah, i was really confused why but this was one of my earliest published poems...same to you too...

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thanks Senpai Ceri for dropping by...as a tribute to our one year i'm publishing this...for more years to come...to Septacore!!!

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      Simple words so strongly put. You are brilliant, and yes, friends are the ones who despite all difference hold our hands when we fall.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thank you Senoritaa...yeah, friends are always there for us whatever comes...

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      ellentaleon 5 years ago

      Hello Raci,

      Very nice poem...Funny and a little bit nostalgic..Keep on writing

      Sweet Raci!! Have a blessed Yuletide Season and a blast of a New Year welcome!! Mwahhhhh...

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Thank you Senpai E for the wonderful comment...Have a Great Yuletide Season too my dear friend...mwahugzzz...

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Raci maybe ellen is right.. maybe a bit nostalgic.. but I see it more as genuine.. great share :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      yeah Frank, you're right, i was on a battle against depression the time i wrote this poem...and that was a year ago...thank you for taking the time to read this...

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Very powerful and another of your gifted ceations. An up up and away here again.

      Take care my dear friend and enjoy our day.

      Eddy.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thank you so much Eddy...you're always very supportive to me...take care and more blessings to come...

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