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closing in on me

Updated on September 24, 2010

 the walls are closing in on me




i should NOT have let you in.

but i did

i couldnt help it

so you went away

i knew you would

if you had let me

just let me

do this the way

that i knew would hurt him less

then things would have been alright

but now

guess where he is

guess what hes doing



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    • puresilence profile image

      puresilence 7 years ago from New Delhi

      good one and nice photograph as well

    • JayDeck profile image

      JayDeck 7 years ago from New Jersey

      I enjoyed this!



    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 7 years ago are not pulling any poetic punches - one just came and gave me a black eye - but at least I am walking away from here with a souvenir!