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against a brick wall

Updated on April 24, 2011

 display me

on your decadent stage

write me

on your infinite page

show me

in your masterful ways

smoke me

in your mystical haze

thrill me

only you know the way

control me

make me behave

give me

what i once gave away

know me

with all of your strange

love me

you wont have to pay

free me

i wont fly away

seek me

i promise ill stay

mold me

form me like clay

game me

you know that I'll play

fill me

and then hit replay

chase me

make me your prey

touch me

ill beg you to stay

dunk me

ill drown in your bay

lay me

till night turns to day

dance me

seductive ballet

ask me

...............you know what ill say.

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    • Little Kim profile image

      Little Kim 6 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

      OOOOOH!! Love this one. Seductive and playful. Very nice!

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      lol ah i figured something like that. sex up against a wall is pretty invigorating. idk i think the word brick just threw me off lol so i wasnt sure. i thought the poem was gonna be about a hard time in your life or something, boy was i surprised. lol i totally missed that inuendo haha

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      ...because ive always wanted to be shoved up against a brick wall, even though i dont do "violent" sex or anything, i just think thats exciting!

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      awesome word play. control me...make me behave...game me...you know that ill play...love me...you wont have to pay. love this. i have one question though, why did you title it against a brick wall??

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      P-N-A,

      Good glad it was enjoyed...

      Z

      I got a "real-job" interview on Thurs-should be interesting 130 pm-*cross fingers*

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      i read that outloud to adon and he laughed like crazy! better than dr. suess!!!

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Pink,

      your right-I ve done some things i wouldn't write about and i can write about stuff i'd never do... Yet I wouldn't write about something i never did while writing about what I wouldnt do or write about, I think. *snicker* no i have not been drinking or smoking anything

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, thats what im saying, writing a thing, and doing a thing are 2 entirely different things all together!

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      pink,

      I am not a slapper or hitter-i'm a lover and a goofer not a fighterI can grab a boob or a buttocks cheek but never anything too harshi am not the kinkiest of folks...

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      yes, i can say that a little shove, push or light slap (never on the face!!!) is alright, and even welcomed sometimes. Anything harsher than that, and pink is outta there!

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      pink,

      wow a hub about bondage.. new stuff for you- who knew...sweet kinda innocent little Pink really a bondage gal-thrill me

      only you know the way

      control me

      make me behave

      interesting a "little unexpected but kinky so I guess not totally" *tee-hee**snicker*

      neat stuff anyway.

      TH

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      nah, the person this is abot knows it, but i doubt they even read me anymore.

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      Misha 6 years ago from DC Area

      Ah, and all this is not about me... :P

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      parduc 6 years ago from Kos island, Greece

      Great hub, beautiful photos! Voted up, awesome, beautiful!

      Liv