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Creation - The Real Story

Updated on February 25, 2014

What REALLY happened

A short story I worte a few years ago while pondering Life, the Universe and everything.

I started to wonder, what if?

What if we had got it all wrong and THIS is what REALLY happened? I guess we will never know.

I hope you enjoy the read,

A different version of an old, old story.

What really happened...

In the Beginning was the Word.

And the Word was...

'Who switched that bloody light on?'

Do you mind? I'm creating here.

"What are you creating here then? All those twinkley things flying about and all that mud."

It's called a Universe.

"Oooo, Universe hey. What does it do? Besides look pretty, and muck up all my nicely organised Chaos"

It doesn't 'do' anything. It just 'is'.

"Well, what is it that it 'just is' then?"

I'm creating 'Planets' and 'Life'.

"Life? What's that then?"

You wouldn't understand.

"Yes I would."

You wouldn't. Now go away and give me some peace.

"You think you're so clever don't you. Like your some supreme omnipotent being or something."

I'm trying to work. I had seven days to get this finished in.

"How many days have you been making this then?"

Six days, now go away and let me work.

"Let me help you then."

What are you doing? Put that stone down.

"OK. It's down. Ops, did I do that? Silly me, not much 'life there now is there?"

You've wiped all the life of my planet. I've got to start again now. I've only got these little bits left.

"Better hurry up then. You've only got a day left to finish it in."

"That's pretty. Let me have a closer look."

I thought you had gone.

"No, I'm still here, in the Chaos. Oh look there's something on that bump waving at me. Hello little life form. That is so cute. Can I have one?"

What are you doing? Don't touch that.

"Yuk, it's wet. I only gave it a little touch."

You killed almost all my life forms now!

"There's still a few left look. Hey, that looks like me."

That life form seems to be progressing faster than the others. I will observe it.

"Ow, what was that?"

What's wrong now?

"Something flew off that planet and hit me in the eye. Those things you made are attacking me."

Don't be silly.

"Yes it did. That's it, I'm telling Mum, and she'll make you destroy it."

You tell Mum Satan, and I'll throw you down, so hard you never get up, Brat.

"Mum, God's picking on me again; he's creating a Universe and won't let me play."

Julie Emovon

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      anonymous 6 years ago

      Nice one! Science has created a story called... The big bang! The story closest to our hearts is the 'real' story! :)

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      juliebirch lm 6 years ago

      @annieangel1: Thank you :D

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      Ann 6 years ago from Yorkshire, England

      love it -