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Dying Faith

Updated on February 27, 2017

The sun rises and it sets

I guess its same for the faith

she gave it all without a lack

but he had no care of her


from the first day when they were friends

she did all and had the hope of same

he even was amazing then

but now no more he lends


yet she's not changed

nor her faith has a bit

but he is totally done

of her faith and also friendship


now what more she can do?

and how more will she try?

how much will she faith a guy

who let her faith die?


she says now she hates "faith"

and won't be able to lend again

and believes its her mistake

that she couldn't make out the dying faith!!

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      Sudiksha 2 years ago from Nepal

      thank u so much HARI. :)

      I'll surely go through your's. Glad u liked it :)

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      Hari Prasad S 2 years ago from Bangalore

      SUPER. you have poured in your true emotions. Heart Felt for you.

      Pls read my poem for you. "Peacock or the kite" and also others. You may get some answers.

      - Hari

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      thank u!! :)

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      Samyukta Shrestha 3 years ago from Kathmandu, Nepal

      I will always be there for supporting you :p

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      samyukta,

      thank u so much!! if I always get your support like this then why not!

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      Samyukta Shrestha 3 years ago from Kathmandu, Nepal

      You are such a amazing writer, your flow of words are awesome, I love your poems. Keep writing you have a far way to go. :D

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