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Fine Red Wine

Updated on April 20, 2014
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You swept me off my feet

Like a fine red wine

Made me complete

In an essence

So divine

The sweet nectar

Leaving vision

To the blind

Stirring something within


Creeping in

Opening up many layers

That were once so closed

So cold

Melting whatever was left

Letting life unfold

When it opened up

There was no stopping it

From release

The magic had it's way

Waiting all this time

To laugh and

To play


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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Thank you Ardhendudey for your kind words. :)

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      Ardhendu Dey 3 years ago from Jamshedpur

      Very exclusive, beautiful and touching. Thumb up for the hub. Liked a lot.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Thank you Manatita. :)

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Sweet and touching, Caroline.

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      Caroline Marie 3 years ago

      Eric thank you :)

      Ruby thank you for your sweet words. :)

      Frank thank you :)

      Gypsy thank you my friend. :)

      Romeo thank you for your wonderful poetic thoughts. :)

      Wayne thank you to you :)

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Intoxicating! Voting up, my dear.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      An exquisite unveiling of loving feeling when those velveteen thuds first roll out the red carpet in anticipatory excitement - so much in there too. Thanks for sharing Caroline.

      Warm Regards;


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Flowed like the best red wine. Cheers!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      loved it like fine wine..

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Sounds like you've found joy, yea...Beautiful!

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      Eric Dierker 4 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Well written