ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing»
  • Poems & Poetry

Poem: Flashbacks

Updated on October 5, 2016

When my soul meet yours-

my heart dribbles quickly.

I need to catch up my breath slowly

something flashed in a dash,

not knowing when it will last

my out of this world fantasies rushed

to my memory that almost crushed.

but suddenly flashbacks came

clearly as the sun rays

passing to my bewildered eyes

that soon began to care

I see you and me in our golden hours

sitting side by side

laughing as words from our lips glide

you treat me as a friend as I do

but my feelings betrayed me

like a sickness from a curse

I fall for you..

I love you sincerely..

until it drives me crazy

I tried to tell you

but you ignored it

I said, I can wait no matter what

but you refused strongly

and worst…

you tried to avoid me eagerly

as if, I am not existing

I cry bitterly

with wine as my shield

just to hide the stub ‘til I sleep

I insisted again

but answers from you

still a big question mark

answers that I’ve been longing since then

that can make my heartache fades

then suddenly…

a whack landed on my nape

hey! wake up!

images vanished in light

as my soul back

to my material body

then a sigh came….

when will my dream of me and you

will be real?

Comments

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 5 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      @DjBryle, vocalcoach, and cleaner3, your great words are indeed an inspiration for me. Thank you so much! ^_^

    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      The power of the imagination, is best when we think about love that could be.

    • vocalcoach profile image

      Audrey Hunt 6 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Ah Yes - I have felt like this before. You write beautifully and truthfully. Thank you. Well done! Rated up.

    • DjBryle profile image

      DjBryle 7 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

      Very eloquent... it steers the souls! Thanks for sharing. Voted up because it deserves such a vote! =)

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Hello ms. serendipity88! ^.^ Thank you verry muchh for appreciating this. I'm happy that you can relate with it..^.^ SALAMAT PO! :)

    • Serendipity88 profile image

      Raina Makdissy 7 years ago from California

      Yet another extremely impressive poem! The words are powerful and it flows so beautifully. I could really relate to this one Pinkhawk. Very visual and moving. Great job! :)

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Thank you Simply Jill, I'm glad that you liked it... Oh really!? Sometimes we have to experience different things unexpectedly, could be positive or negative but for sure these things taught us a lesson that we can use to survive and become a better person, just go on and you'll see...^.^

    • Simply Jill profile image

      Simply Jill 7 years ago

      love it, I've felt like this too many times!

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Hello ma'am Polly! Thank you for dropping by, ^.^!

    • Pollyannalana profile image

      Pollyannalana 7 years ago from US

      Very good,just enough to make us wonder! Polly

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Thank you ma'am Freya Cesare!^.^

    • Freya Cesare profile image

      Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Sweet words, even full of pain. Thank for sharing, Pinkhawk.

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ...let me express my gratitude in my own language- MARAMING SALAMAT PO ULI SA INYONG LAHAT!(thank you very much once again to all of you!)...

      Yeah this is a familiar one because usually it happens in real life... :(....but that's life!

    • Joy56 profile image

      Joy56 7 years ago

      this is all to familiar a story, expressed so well in your words, well done.

    • Coolmon2009 profile image

      Coolmon2009 7 years ago from Texas, USA

      Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it :)

    • Deborah Demander profile image

      Deborah Demander 7 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

      Great imagery in your poem.

      Namaste.

    • alternate poet profile image

      alternate poet 7 years ago

      Nice - "You try to avoid me eagerly" - and expressive :)

    • pinkhawk profile image
      Author

      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS! ^.^

    • valeriebelew profile image

      valeriebelew 7 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

      Sad story, but all too common. Lots of emotion went into this piece. Liked it.

    • Awful Poet profile image

      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Very Nice Peice.

    • Michael Shane profile image

      Michael Shane 7 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

      Great writing style!

    • thevoice profile image

      thevoice 7 years ago from carthage ill

      great poetry well said thanks

    • warrioRR profile image

      warrioRR 7 years ago from Rawalpindi Pakistan

      Cool!