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Poem: Flashbacks

Updated on June 27, 2018

When my soul met yours-

my heart dribbles quickly.

I need to catch up my breath slowly

then something flashed in a dash,

not knowing when it will last.

My out of this world fantasies rushed

to my memory that almost crushed.

Suddenly flashbacks came

clearly as the sun rays,

passing to my bewildered eyes

that soon began to care.

I see you and me in our golden hours,

sitting side by side,

laughing as words from our lips glide.

You treat me as a friend as I do

but my feelings betrayed me

like a sickness from a curse

I fall for you...

I love you sincerely

until it drives me crazy.

I tried to tell you

but you ignored it.

I said, I can wait no matter what

but you refused strongly

and worst…

you tried to avoid me eagerly.

As if, I am not existing.

I cry bitterly

with wine as my shield

just to hide the stub ‘til I sleep.

I insisted again

but answers from you

still a big question mark,

answers that I’ve been longing since then

that can make my heartache fades.

suddenly…

a whack landed on my nape.

hey! wake up!

images vanished in light

as my soul back

to my body

then a sigh came….

when will my dream of me and you

will be real?

© 2010 pinkhawk

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    • pinkhawk profile imageAUTHOR

      pinkhawk 

      6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      @DjBryle, vocalcoach, and cleaner3, your great words are indeed an inspiration for me. Thank you so much! ^_^

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      cleaner3 

      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      The power of the imagination, is best when we think about love that could be.

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      Audrey Hunt 

      7 years ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Ah Yes - I have felt like this before. You write beautifully and truthfully. Thank you. Well done! Rated up.

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      DjBryle 

      8 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

      Very eloquent... it steers the souls! Thanks for sharing. Voted up because it deserves such a vote! =)

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      pinkhawk 

      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Hello ms. serendipity88! ^.^ Thank you verry muchh for appreciating this. I'm happy that you can relate with it..^.^ SALAMAT PO! :)

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      Raina Makdissy 

      8 years ago from California

      Yet another extremely impressive poem! The words are powerful and it flows so beautifully. I could really relate to this one Pinkhawk. Very visual and moving. Great job! :)

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      pinkhawk 

      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Thank you Simply Jill, I'm glad that you liked it... Oh really!? Sometimes we have to experience different things unexpectedly, could be positive or negative but for sure these things taught us a lesson that we can use to survive and become a better person, just go on and you'll see...^.^

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      Simply Jill 

      8 years ago

      love it, I've felt like this too many times!

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      pinkhawk 

      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Hello ma'am Polly! Thank you for dropping by, ^.^!

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      Pollyannalana 

      8 years ago from US

      Very good,just enough to make us wonder! Polly

    • pinkhawk profile imageAUTHOR

      pinkhawk 

      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      Thank you ma'am Freya Cesare!^.^

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      Freya Cesare 

      8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Sweet words, even full of pain. Thank for sharing, Pinkhawk.

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      pinkhawk 

      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ...let me express my gratitude in my own language- MARAMING SALAMAT PO ULI SA INYONG LAHAT!(thank you very much once again to all of you!)...

      Yeah this is a familiar one because usually it happens in real life... :(....but that's life!

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      Joy56 

      8 years ago

      this is all to familiar a story, expressed so well in your words, well done.

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      Coolmon2009 

      8 years ago from Texas, USA

      Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it :)

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      Deborah Demander 

      8 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

      Great imagery in your poem.

      Namaste.

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      alternate poet 

      8 years ago

      Nice - "You try to avoid me eagerly" - and expressive :)

    • pinkhawk profile imageAUTHOR

      pinkhawk 

      8 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS! ^.^

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      valeriebelew 

      8 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

      Sad story, but all too common. Lots of emotion went into this piece. Liked it.

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      David Walston 

      8 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Very Nice Peice.

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      Michael Shane 

      8 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

      Great writing style!

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      thevoice 

      8 years ago from carthage ill

      great poetry well said thanks

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      warrioRR 

      8 years ago from Rawalpindi Pakistan

      Cool!

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