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Can I Forgive me please?

Updated on March 27, 2013


Could you please forgive me?


      Oh my  Dirty hands

I can only see my underfoot land


    I never meant to hurt you

Only guilt will make you understand


        Can't heal this overwhelming wounds

Ever lasting unavoidable sounds


Touch me

        Feel me

    But only forgiving will make me feel


I could be death.






       Could I please, forgive me?!


Touch me

                   Feel me

  Is such a feeling

Sooner or later

      Just need to stand

until my dinner's waiter steps


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    • Woman Of Courage profile image

      Woman Of Courage 

      7 years ago

      This is wonderful, and very touching.

    • sunbrite profile image

      sunbrite 

      8 years ago from USA

      Nicely done...Thank you for sharing:)

    • motricio profile imageAUTHOR

      Mauricio Rodriguez 

      8 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      -Ralwus, absolutely correct.

      -kurojohns, Thank you for stopping by and reading. =)

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      kurojohns 

      8 years ago from Muntinlupa, Philippines

      Good job.

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      ralwus 

      8 years ago

      Forgiveness is the fragrance that the rose bleeds on the fingers that have crushed it. I can smell it here.

    • motricio profile imageAUTHOR

      Mauricio Rodriguez 

      8 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      -Maita: De nada ;)

      -Mega: I did, I broke a heart.

      And it broke mine.

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      mega1 

      8 years ago

      I could forgive you - you have done nothing wrong, I'm sure, but I could!

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      prettydarkhorse 

      8 years ago from US

      hey this is touching hah, Gracias Senor, maita

    • motricio profile imageAUTHOR

      Mauricio Rodriguez 

      8 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      You're welcome Shaz =)

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      shazwellyn 

      8 years ago from Great Britain

      Very artie! Thanks x

    • motricio profile imageAUTHOR

      Mauricio Rodriguez 

      8 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      Thnx very much Quill & Petra

      =)

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      Petra Vlah 

      8 years ago from Los Angeles

      A real treat, Thank You

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      "Quill" 

      8 years ago

      Well done...touches deeply

      Blessings

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