Can I Forgive me please?
Could you please forgive me?
Oh my Dirty hands
I can only see my underfoot land
I never meant to hurt you
Only guilt will make you understand
Can't heal this overwhelming wounds
Ever lasting unavoidable sounds
Touch me
Feel me
But only forgiving will make me feel
I could be death.
Could I please, forgive me?!
Touch me
Feel me
Is such a feeling
Sooner or later
Just need to stand
until my dinner's waiter steps
Comments
Well done...touches deeply
Blessings
A real treat, Thank You
- Author
Thnx very much Quill & Petra
=)
Very artie! Thanks x
- Author
You're welcome Shaz =)
hey this is touching hah, Gracias Senor, maita
I could forgive you - you have done nothing wrong, I'm sure, but I could!
- Author
-Maita: De nada ;)
-Mega: I did, I broke a heart.
And it broke mine.
Forgiveness is the fragrance that the rose bleeds on the fingers that have crushed it. I can smell it here.
Good job.
- Author
-Ralwus, absolutely correct.
-kurojohns, Thank you for stopping by and reading. =)
Nicely done...Thank you for sharing:)
This is wonderful, and very touching.
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