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Can I Forgive me please?
Could you please forgive me?
Oh my Dirty hands
I can only see my underfoot land
I never meant to hurt you
Only guilt will make you understand
Can't heal this overwhelming wounds
Ever lasting unavoidable sounds
Touch me
Feel me
But only forgiving will make me feel
I could be death.
Could I please, forgive me?!
Touch me
Feel me
Is such a feeling
Sooner or later
Just need to stand
until my dinner's waiter steps
Comments
This is wonderful, and very touching.
Nicely done...Thank you for sharing:)
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-Ralwus, absolutely correct.
-kurojohns, Thank you for stopping by and reading. =)
Good job.
Forgiveness is the fragrance that the rose bleeds on the fingers that have crushed it. I can smell it here.
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-Maita: De nada ;)
-Mega: I did, I broke a heart.
And it broke mine.
I could forgive you - you have done nothing wrong, I'm sure, but I could!
hey this is touching hah, Gracias Senor, maita
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You're welcome Shaz =)
Very artie! Thanks x
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Thnx very much Quill & Petra
=)
A real treat, Thank You
Well done...touches deeply
Blessings
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