Untitled Song (As of yet)

  1. Jackson Riddle profile image52
    Jackson Riddleposted 8 years ago

    Read with somber tempo

    Early bird begins to wake
    A new day a dawning
    Commences his chirping
    No worm he’ll catch this early morning

    The sun now rise,
    Heat beats down,
    Scorches leaves
    That lay upon the ground

    As we see the day gleam
    Last forever it will seem
    No longer can we live,
    ’Cos I wanna be a part of this

    Clouds now pass
    Through the sky
    Sun now leaves
    as the moon will rise

    In the night,
    The stars will glow,
    Soon it will be time
    For the moon to go

    As we see the night go past
    Wishing that it would last
    No longer can I live,
    ’Cos I wanna be a part of this

    A work in progress but would love to hear what you all think, thanks. As this was really off the top of my head I am unaware of any songs like this but I am not sure, something could have planted something in the back of my head as the last line sounds familiar.

  2. repstrydiefly profile image64
    repstrydieflyposted 8 years ago

    that is a very interesting interpretation of "Day and Night".
    I like that and would definitely be able to use it in my works. I wear Black and White as a theme to describe Night and Day, because I believe the Sun and the Moon have a very important impact on our lives and the way we live.

  3. Jackson Riddle profile image52
    Jackson Riddleposted 8 years ago

    I still don't think the lyrics alone can provide enough insight into the lyrics. I'll try and find a program which I can download to make the tune so you guys can all hear it.

    If I can somehow magically compose music that is.

 
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