Would you read this if it were a book?

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  1. m peavy profile image60
    m peavyposted 12 years ago

    Would you read this if it were a book?

    I am currently writing a book and hub pages has helped me out greatly.. I have made zero dollars on this site but that isn't why I am here. I wrote " The Sun Shines Bright: A Revelation" as a preface to the book I am working on. Does this sound like something you would read?

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  2. duffsmom profile image61
    duffsmomposted 12 years ago

    For me it depends more on content and subject matter.  From the title it appears to be non-fiction, is that right?  I would have to know more before I would know if it is something I might read.

    Update:  I did read it and, respectfully, there are a number of errors in spelling and grammar:  are instead of our, things like that.

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  3. Queen of Cups profile image59
    Queen of Cupsposted 12 years ago

    It seems a bit rough in the making but if you were to make it a little simpler and more catching in its simplicity than I think it would draw more eyes to it; it is best not to overdo things and titles are one of them.

    I think the biggest challenge people face are striving to create titles that lure another in with a few words. If there are too many it becomes a cluttered title.

    In some cases, less is better.

    Going out on a limb now, and without knowledge of the context of the book, I would maybe say that "Enlightened by the Sun" would be better or "The Solar Key to my Revelation" {even though it is about as lengthy as your own title}

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  4. m peavy profile image60
    m peavyposted 12 years ago

    It is a bit rough.. i agree. this was written off the top of my head. I guess I should have refined it a bit before I asked this question. I have refined it a bit and have actually outlined about 20 chapters.. I will reintroduce it shortly.. thanks for the feed back.

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    1. Queen of Cups profile image59
      Queen of Cupsposted 12 years agoin reply to this

      You're very welcome but it is good you asked it and got the feedback in the first place; constructive criticism and refinement are the biggest parts of the writing process so keep the enthusiasm! It was intriguing nonetheless.

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