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get away from me

Updated on March 28, 2011

Get away from me

leave me alone

Ive had enough today

and i don't want to be around you.

the moment you came into the room

i just wanted you to leave

its not you

but it is you.

 

I'm angry

and your presence is making it worse.

almost making me sick

I'm not mad at you

but i want to be by myself

i don't want to talk,

i don't want to listen

I'm exhausted enough

without hearing your blah blah...

.....blah

meaningless dribble

nonsensical thoughts

that i couldn't care less about

if i tried

i don't care about your day

i don't want to hear you breathe

i can feel you in my space

and its making me angrier by the second

just leave, leave the room

take the hint that I'm giving you

i don't want to hear my own voice

i just want to zone out

and your talking

i don't even hear what your saying

I'm just hoping you will have a reason to leave the room

leave me alone

nothings wrong

nothing personal

but i don't want you in my face right now

so please

fuck off.

 

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      Johnny Love 6 years ago

      OH MY WORD, beautiful. feelings so easy to relate with even though I am sure I don't relate at all. Lost in the confusion left behind my sorrowful heart bleeding broken tears of blood from a heart so cursed to beat. I love this.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      well doug, im not so sure how its flying, because i went from a 95 to a 91 in just a week. Im sure its the cursing. Hubpages no doubt does not want to filter my writing, but i have been pretty loose lipped. im going to tone it down a little, i just hate substitutes when im writing.

      thanx Kim!! i hope you can all relate. either that, or im a bad person, lol.

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      Little Kim 6 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

      Ha! Love it! We can all relate? Be honest now everyone.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      Whoah, rough day. I honestly didn't know the F-bomb could fly here on hubpages. Best of luck with that.

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      andycool 6 years ago from the U.S.

      Hey the pink umbrella please do not think it's directed at you! Whenever I read a poetry in Hubs, if it's appealing to me, I tend to reply in the form of a small poem! I've written many poems in comments, not directed to anyone! I don't know anyone of the poets personally! - Andy

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      oh tom! lol

      Elizabeth- thank you for appreciating the oomph that the poem needed. Never underestimate the power of the word Fuck when the situation calls for it. No substitute will do sometimes!

      andycool- nice. i do however hope that is not directed at me, i am not lonely in this piece, im the cousin of the opposite of alone....annoyed

      And you know what, i really do hope you guys can relate to this. Anyone ever in a room, and the minute someone walks in weather it be a certain someone, or just anyone, and you just want them to leave? Your trying to be nice listening to what they have to say, but in your head you just screaming "get out!!!!" Even if they dont talk, sometimes someone comes in and sits down, completely silent, and i just fuel with anger. Their very presence is enough to ruin your solace. Anyway, its how i felt when i wrote it. Fucking angry, and annoyed. :) cheers people!

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      Elizabeth99 6 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

      The end is perfect, awesome!! :)

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Pinky.. I swear I'll go....leave you along I am sorry

      *sniff-sniff*, I'll just leave you alone don't worry i'll just go away... i see how it is ....

      Good piece

      TH

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      andycool 6 years ago from the U.S.

      Let me come in

      I'm a stranger,

      Let me love you

      That's no danger!

      Fly high with me

      Sky is above only,

      I just want nothing

      Can't help see you lonely!

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      Can relate so well!!

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      Carolyn Gibson 6 years ago from Boston

      Powerful!