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Good Bye Dear

Updated on February 27, 2017

IT my was brightening sun ,

IT was my moon when i darkened.

IT made me enjoy my every moment,

and IT made me to "live"


IT was a wing that made me bird fly,

IT was a reason for my smile,

i had a hope ITwould last forever,

but IT abruptly disappeared


no reason but IT vanished,

and i miss IT every now and then,

every time the memory of IT flashes,

this IT is something that isn't gained though i pay thousands of cash


its true who said, its not past,

its memory what hurts,

but the fault is mine i feel,

i wasn't to expect so much from IT


good bye dear,

live long as stars,

stay happy though we're apart,


good bye dear,

do take care,

i will try enjoying though you aren't here

good bye dear.......!!!

is it hard to say goodbye?

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      Sudiksha 

      3 years ago from Nepal

      thank you so much :)

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      Sudiksha 

      3 years ago from Nepal

      thank u seenjt! that's a huge compliment for a starter like me. thank u

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      seenjet 

      3 years ago

      I'm sure to notice that Mona Lisha's mannerism reflects in your poem. The saturation point from where you're to say Good Bye is amazing...

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      3 years ago from Nepal

      thank you jodah, for your appreciation!

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      John Hansen 

      3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      This is a beautiful poem itsmesudiksha...very nice imagery. Keep writing and practicing your art. Good luck.

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      Sudiksha 

      3 years ago from Nepal

      thank you so much, AliciaC. means a lot!

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      Linda Crampton 

      3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is a lovely description of the loss of something beautiful, itsmesudiksha.

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      3 years ago from Nepal

      monia,

      yes. its hard but isn't impossible!

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      monia ben saad 

      3 years ago from In my Dream

      so hard to say that's word

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      Eemily,

      Thank you :)

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      Eemily 

      4 years ago from california

      wow!

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      :) rajkumar

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      Rajkumar Shakha 

      4 years ago

      i loved this poem!! :)

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      thank u dear..!! :)

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      BeEnA kArKi 

      4 years ago

      its so beautiful... love it!!

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      thank u :)

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      ranzu 

      4 years ago

      my pleasure sis... :) beautiful article

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      thank u di... :)

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      ranzu 

      4 years ago

      brillant.......superb!!!

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      thank you samyukta... i was just to write but it depends on one who studies in what point they took it... feeling glad that u understood so well..:)

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      Samyukta Shrestha 

      4 years ago from Kathmandu, Nepal

      It's not past, it's the memory what hurts and now, this present is what gonna be a memory so make every moment wonderful

      keep smiling and make each day awesome... Beautifully written

    • itsmesudiksha profile imageAUTHOR

      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      thank u so much ria...

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      Sudiksha 

      4 years ago from Nepal

      thank you garima

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      ria 

      4 years ago

      u have that thing that will lead u ahead.. its beautiful!

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      Garima Bista 

      4 years ago from Kathmandu,Nepal

      It is so good.

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