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i love you..

Updated on January 19, 2014


It’s only you, beautiful

who can put a smile on my face

like this

it’s only you,

that I can’t stop chasing them butterflies


so what

if I kiss you in the air

and have a float of thoughts

in the clouds


so what

if I break away

in a sinking sand I suffocate


the fiery dust has burnt my strings

now I am falling again…


and it's only you, beautiful...



**This is my one-hundredth hub and it’s for my Ash…

Babe, I wrote this for you. <3


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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks you two :)

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      Eric T. Shortridge 4 years ago from MidWest

      Beautiful in it's nakedness... makes me want to fall in love again... :)

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Outstanding results here

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      you tremble from tenderness and love wow! You flatter me so much Max! You rock. Have a great day:)

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Brilliant as ever, wow... Just so overwhelmingly sweet, me trembles from tenderness and love! (should go and read your prose, time is a killer, but I most definitely will do, you captured me tight =))

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Oh you brought me back here.. I love this one. Thanks a lot Krypto!

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      KryptoGirl 6 years ago from Redding

      Ahhh so romantic. Such a poetic lover ^.^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Jess, hey good to see you back in my pages ;) Thank you.

      Freya hello! :) You write so lovely.

      Hi Epi! Oh thank you. :) Cheeky Girl indeed did an amazing review of my book. She's an ace and a pro. Me and moi friends adore your poetry, too. You're proud of us? Wow! My profile picture ha, it's for Halloween. Since it's done, gonna change it again. Horns are not appropriate anymore LMAO

      My gorgeous! It's an honor to influence you write lovey-dovey poetry. Gotta read! Thank you so much Epi. It's such a great compliment to be admired by a very good poet like you :)

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..yes I must drop by once again to congratulate you on your stunning book review by CHEEKY GIRL. Actually I am so proud of both of you by the way - and I simply adore your new profile picture.

      I have been writing more of the lovey-dovey poetry lately if you've noticed and it's the influence of writers like you and Acaetnna - quite a compliment to both of you I might add - and a heartfelt congratulations on your book - bravo!!!!

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      Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Soooo sweeeet! Lovely, Blaise!

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      Jess Killmenow 6 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      This feels so good. Thank you.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hi Epi! It's so nice to float..OK, just float up there LOL Thanks for dropping by. :)

      Hello Ron! Holly crickets you're on Hubpages! Glad to see you here cousin. Why the hell we have the same IP?! That's weird.....

      Hello Niceandcool! Ronald!!! We have the same IP LMAO Glad to inspire you. LOL

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      niceandcool 6 years ago from Philippines

      blaise, i really love the picture. 'know what? because of you, i made my account in this site, i was inspired by you... this was the first hub that I've read... big thanks.

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      ronald 6 years ago

      so wonderful... as if i'm so in love at this moment... those cute words make me sing...

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..I am floating - blissfully - in the sacred air right now - and darn it I don't ever want to come down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      haha Poet L, you know I love ya :) Thanks for stopping over

      Hi Cassy! I'm lazy to submit LOL There will always be something to write about ;)

      Fullerman, Dim and Pegcole, thank you guys! :)

      Hello Brands :) Good to see you. You're right. I love your poems..obviously, you're in love. Thanks for reading.

      Hi CM Castro! Thanks for the fanmail. :) I'm glad to bring you positivity ;) Love your writings.

      Hi Acaetnna! Indeed :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Beautiful. True love is the most beautiful experience of all.

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      Christina M. Castro 6 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      I am so glad I found your hub. I need to hear some positive words about Love, which is God, and especially when I am dealing with a No-love situation right now. thanks

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      brandonfan 6 years ago from Mid West

      I love the simplicity of this poem Blaise. If there's anything in this world that matters, love should be at the top of everyone's list!

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      Peg Cole 6 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Very sweet and a joy to read. xxxoo

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      overwhelmingly beautiful. xxxxxx

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      Ryan Fuller 6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      this was a good hub and poem.

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Oldie Hubber? LOL! Well that's 6 months more than me here, Blaise. Always submit your hubs to Search Engines and Submit Express, and RSS Feed them around, those are good ways to get extra views! Um, the age-hubber rating thing would be nice but would take too long. I wanna be rich long before then! LOL! 500 Hubs, that is a good target. Here's hoping we don't run out of things to write about! :D

      Have a great day, Blaise. :D XO

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      who is Ash, i am jealous..... nice one.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you Cheeky friend :) Blaise25 is just 16 months old, not that oldie hubber LMAO. I wish earnings here goes up as well as hubbers-age whaddaya think? Maybe after 500 hubs I'll retire then LMAO I kid.

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Hy Blaise, congrats on reaching 100 hubs with this very romantic Hub. Love is cool, ain't it just! Hehehehe! Blaise, you're a Marvel. Your poetry always delights, and impresses me. Cheers! Happy 100. Wow, you don't look that old. Heh! :D XO

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      @AMorea - Hi! Thanks for the beautiful comments :)

      @Cathy - hello :) Your warm words mean a lot. Thank you moi friend. Yup, my 100th..let's have more cheers! Aww, is it so obvious how much I'm in love? ;) Have a great weekend moi friend. TC XX

      @CM - thanks :)

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      carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      nicely done.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      This is so beautiful and sweet. I love the image of butterflies and floating in the air. Gosh, your 100th hub. That is so cool. Congratulations. Your Ash is one special and lucky person. Aaw, I love a nice romantic lovey dovey hub. :) Have a great weekend, blaise. X

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      amorea13 6 years ago

      Beautiful. Nothing more to say.

      Except - thank you.

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      amorea13 6 years ago

      Beautiful. No other words required.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      thanks to all. this is special :)

      and

      i love you, babe..

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      Really special

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful!!

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      denden mangubat 6 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

      nice and sweet

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Ash sounds like a lucky person,an intimatly felt verse,Blaise;)

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Very nice Blaise! Thanks Ma'am!

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      CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

      Love you babe :) it's stunning.. i love it..

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks Kel :) Good to see you here

      Thank you Sligobay. cheers :)

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      sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

      Hello Blaise:)a century of hub and still in lub. Cheers.

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      st0rm3 6 years ago from Durban, South Africa

      awwww.... :) stunning