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i want to hear you say it

Updated on February 26, 2012

loves me or loves me not

poem

these words i hear all the time, from other guys; you are beautiful, sexy, i love your smile and those eyes are so pretty. those words that come from these other mens mouths don't even phase me i don't want nor do i need those other men to praise me. for you are the only one that i want to hear speak these words, i yern for your attention and crave your affection, but no matter how i tell you i cannot achieve to obtain this. at times i feel like you have no interest in me, because when you speak to me it seems you are looking right through me. wait, what am i doing, expecting this from you is like trying to end world hunger.

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    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I like your poetry but the form you put it into would help it out more if you broke it up

      please don't take this wrong. I like the way you express yourself.

      Michael

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      Delilah 5 years ago from los angeles, ca

      thanks guys

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      .....well okay then - I love you for what you are doing here and that is taking the written word and the art of poetry into another new and exciting direction - creating your own language and that's something the epi man always looks out for - and my friend - you've got it. Big time. lake erie time ontario canada 10:30pm