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I'm Sorry

Updated on March 6, 2010

I'm Sorry

I never thought things would turn out this way

And all that I wanted was for you to ask me to stay

Cause’ all I’ve ever known is to love you

And all I’ve ever wanted was to hold you

In my arms, so tight

Please don’t say goodbye, tonight


(And I’m sorry, for all the bad times,

And I’m sorry, our love got left behind

We can’t change the promises broken

Can’t take away the mean words we’ve spoken

I wish we could start over again)

Love will prevail; yes that’s what they say

But all that I feel is our love slipping away

I see our life together crumbling down,

With each tear I cry, oh I thought that I’d found

The missing piece of my heart


Well I guess this is it, I won’t hope any more

And I will just pick my broken heart off the floor

No matter if you’re not beside me

Your love will stay deep down inside me

Forever More


© Sunshyne Ellen Dickerson


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    • smilngirl4u profile image

      smilngirl4u 7 years ago from Palmdale, CA

      This is nice. Looking forward to reading more from you. =)

    • stars439 profile image

      stars439 7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Very Very nice. God Bless You

    • Se7enth Poet profile image

      Se7enth Poet 7 years ago from Southern California

      wow, I love it :)

    • Krazy_Teaney profile image

      Krazy_Teaney 7 years ago

      This is one of my favorites mommy

    • Tom Cornett profile image

      Tom Cornett 7 years ago from Ohio

      You have wonderful emotion here and good structure for a song.

      "With each tear I cry, oh I thought that I’d found

      The missing piece of my heart" I love that!

      Try writing something about how you feel and don't think of rhyming or even structure. As if you're having a conversation with your heart.

      You have what I call "The writer thingy." Nice work. :)

    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Interesting style of writing, well done...