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last first kiss

Updated on November 22, 2012

Last night was just a glimse
Of heaven and it's shores
Already I know the truth
It's you my soul adores

A thousand questions spinning
As my soul waits to depart
Upon the voyage one more time
Discovering your heart

Guilded by new stars
To find paradise's key
Where I am stuck in you
And your tangled up in me

Stardust cast upon us
To give us our true wish
Whispering to our hearts


You've had your last first kiss


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      Laura 

      5 years ago

      Cannot believe I missed this one..... Totally speechless . Simply could re read re read .... How you manage to capture all these feelings and illustrates them so wonderfully.......

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      Jon 

      5 years ago from UK

      James this really is one of the most wonderful comments I have ever had , thank you so much for reading my work :)

      Simba

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Can I just say I am speechless. The way you put things...the way it is so smooth sounding. This is just AMAZING it really is. 5/5 Thumbs up.

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      loveofnight 

      5 years ago from Baltimore, Maryland

      As always, you know how to put pen to paper. Short, sweet and to the point....

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Absolutely wonderful poem.

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      Eiddwen 

      5 years ago from Wales

      Guilded by new stars

      To find paradise's key

      Where I am stuck in you

      And your tangled up in me

      Stardust cast upon us

      To give us our true wish

      Whispering to our hearts

      You've had your last first kiss

      Brilliant and I vote up and share;a great poem and here's to so many more to follow.Have a wonderful weekend.

      Eddy.

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      Paula 

      5 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Sweet!....Love this. Very nice to imagine.....

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      Deborah 

      5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Simba, you are an excellent poet. Just beautiful, and so nice to see you again at the hubs!

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful poem, Jon. 'last first kiss'. Love it!

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      Randi Benlulu 

      5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful! I love the way you state it! Up and awesome!

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      A poem with the depth of ages. Well done. Thank you

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, how very lovely and a great play on words, last first kiss - that is really nice. Very beautiful poem.

      Voted Way Up and sharing and pinning.

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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