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Long Journey!!

Updated on February 27, 2017

Life Journey

This journey isn't hard

nor its easy the way you feel

but yes its mysterious

to which its bit difficult to deal


solve the puzzles out

of this long journey!

some roads here are black topped

and some are non pitched


sometimes it shall rain heavily

and may dirty your roads

but one day sky will be clear

and you can cherish your long journey to home


you may fall many a time

but you've to stand of

you may even lost your way

but you have to find it out


cause remember, this isn't a easy journey

but if you try it isn't hard

you should never give up

and win over this Long Journey!!


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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      smilealot,

      i am very happy that my message got out to you. you are welcome and thank you for appreciation

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      you've got it correct TOBUSINESS thank you for your words

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      you've got it correct TOBUSINESS thank you for your words

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      Smilealot 3 years ago

      Life often feels like a continuous journey as we never seem to arrive, so we must keep going forward, you conveyed this message very well in your poetry...thank you for sharing:-))

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      It is a journey of wonder, there is many obstacles, but we can always find our way. Beautiful thoughts.

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      Eddy,

      thank you for your kind appriciation

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful and I now look forward to many more by you.

      Eddy.

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      feels good you understood!!

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Yes so true life's journey is not so hard if you try.

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      thank u billybuc for your appreciation!

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Giving up is not an option....beautiful thoughts here.

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      a huge smile on my face :) thanks again, you are always inspirational.

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      Samyukta Shrestha 3 years ago from Kathmandu, Nepal

      Always there for you

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      thanks a lot samyukta...!! means a lot to get a compliment from such a good writer friend.

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      thanks a lot samyukta...!! means a lot to get a compliment from such a good writer friend.

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      Kamalesh,

      thank u so much for your support!

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      Sudiksha 3 years ago from Nepal

      thank u so much!! #garimaa

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      Samyukta Shrestha 3 years ago from Kathmandu, Nepal

      It's so beautifully written the way you've described the journey of our life in a simple way. There are up and downs, dark and bright days in life. You've describe LIFE in such a beautiful manner, truly awesome.

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      Kamalesh050 3 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Good poem - keep writing my friend. Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Garima Bista 3 years ago from Kathmandu,Nepal

      Really good!

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