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Life's a Rubik's Cube
art & poetry by Brian Loewer
a short poem
Life's a Rubik's Cube
made of ice cubes and glue.
All the melted colors
have me so confused.
I squint and squirm
to make sense of the puzzle,
as my view becomes
more distorted and muddled.
Dripped puddles-
of a game I didn't begin,
dissolve into chaos
before I can win.
© 2012 Brian M. Loewer All rights reserved.
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Comments
- Author
I do too Moms. It makes hubpages such an interesting place to visit.
There are so many diverse views and experiences here.
I love being transported into thoughts I would never have thought on my own.
- Author
Maria! I'm glad to see you're still reading my poems, even though you're no longer hubbing. I feel encouraged every time you stop by. Thanks so much for your kind words.
-brian
"All the melted colors have me so confused"
I'm confused too at times, Brian :) anyways, that's what life's all about.
A sparky poem. Makes me awake and stop wondering.
Merry Xmas!
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healthylife2, thank you so much. Your encouragement is much appreciated. It looks like you have some great knowledge and experience to share in your appealing collection of hubs. I look forward to reading!
-Blessings
Awesome job..glad I discovered your creative writing! Life does sometimes feel the way you described it. Voting up!
- Author
Wise words FitnezzJim, haha. Thanks for the comment.
Ahh, puzzles and games - sometimes the best are not played to win, but merely to entertain.
- Author
safiq- I'm glad to hear it. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
I'm glad I saw this. It livened me up a little.
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Thanks so much Deborah! I appreciate the comment and share.
Merry Christmas to you too!
what a great poem.. I love it.. I take my hat too you.. I really liked these lines
Dripped puddles-
of a game he didn't begin,
dissolve into chaos
before he can win.
sharing
Merry Christmas
Debbie
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