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Oh Tears... :: A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2012

A painful dialogue with tears. This poem was among the first few that I wrote in Oct 1998.

"Oh Tears...

  Your rolling sadly down my cheeks

  Tears mercilessly, my heart to pieces,

  Listens only to sympathetic voices,

  Created imbalance in my personality

  Arouses in friends - a great curiosity

  Makes my life very intolerable

  As if its not worth livable...

  A sob, a sniff, a weep and cries

  Your unwelcome existence shoos off smiles

  Oh tears...

  Your rolling sadly down my cheeks..."

Please feel free to leave me any comments. Thanks for your time =)


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    • cloudy_cool profile image

      cloudy_cool 5 years ago from London, UK

      Lakshmi dear, thank you for being such a great friend!

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      cloudy_cool 5 years ago from London, UK

      Well thats a very encouraging comment aware :)


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      aware 5 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.


      i like the way you write.

      i stumbled upon you.

      for this i feel better.

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      DilaraMawlaMonzur 6 years ago

      Really nice!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...well I've cried a lot in the past year - probably more so than at any time in my life - so I can definitely relate to these words - again, so well put together by you and of course beautifully crafted too!

      lake erie time 3:04pm

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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Crying help clean the soul,

      nice post

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      BDhire 6 years ago

      good one....

      "I will cry when its raining........."

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      sonia05 7 years ago from india

      very nice!

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      Lakshmi Murukesh 7 years ago from Kollam