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The Golden Rose

Updated on November 11, 2012

Beauty in the Eye of the Beholder

Golden hair, golden gifts, golden rose,

for you.

Hair that glistens in the sun, Satin to

the touch.

Golden rose, timeless treasure, as are you,

Forever.

Dancing eyes, Porcelain skin, A smile that I

could die for.

Long strands of Gold ........ your hair, Pert little chin,

That´s you.

Rose--coloured cupid lips, and apple cheeks,

You´re beautiful.

Legs like Gazelles, so long, so brown, so fast,

You run.

Golden Hair, rose---bud lips, The Golden Rose,

That´s You..

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you very much Angelique.

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    Angelique Newman 5 years ago from Canada

    Beautifully written Dim; I love the words you've chosen, it so visual :)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you for your comment. ´´so full of love´´ you say.

    l wrote it thinking of my grandaughter.

    Take care.

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    Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

    Such a lovely write--so full of love and so descriptive!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you, Movie Master. Good to see you.....

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    Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    So descriptive and beautiful Dim, lovely and voted up.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    very kind of you to comment, mathira, thank you.

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    mathira 5 years ago from chennai

    Very cute and sweet, Dim.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    awwwwwwww that is very sweet of you.

    Thank you for the comment.

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    femmeflashpoint 5 years ago

    Lovely description, Dim.

    It gave me an "awwwww .... " moment. :)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Lovely comment for which l thank you, mathira.

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    mathira 5 years ago

    Very vivid description and had the effect of a visual seen in person.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    l m so glad that you loved it. It was very short and sweet.

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    Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

    what a very descriptive hub.. I loved it!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Eye Say Thank you for being so quick to comment. my 1st visitor to this poem.

    Lady Tenaz.. Glad you liked it. Take care.

    blaise25 Thank you ., Love your comment. like you and me Ha Ha .

    Sunnie.. Loved your comment. l´d settle for being able to run. ! Hee! Hee!!

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    Sunnie Day 5 years ago

    Hello Dim,

    Very nice Dim..I was thinking of a sweet young girl running through the fields..innocent and full of life..oh to be that young again..oh to have long legs that run like Gazelles..Beautiful

    Have a wonderful Holiday,

    Hugs,

    Sunnie

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    Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

    Oh wow, you are describing a goddess here, like you and me :)

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    Lady T (JJ) 5 years ago

    I loved this!!! So sweet and beautiful!

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    eye say 5 years ago from Canada

    very nice ...