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the passanger

Updated on October 13, 2011

gracefully her words are bent

like the arms of a ballerina

not talent, but practice

drives her

like delicate spider legs

weaving a web

yet imperfect as a broken promise

she writes of lust and tears

of power

and double edged bull shit

and breathes slightly easier

with each finished piece

the nights wear on

as does her need

to pliet with pen

dancing the dance of ink

the words come out perfectly

as do all words

when no one is around to receive them

silently she moves

to the music inside of her

interpreting her deepest passions

attempting to heal what is broken.

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      Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

      Another interesting piece. I see you're working out your frustrations, feelings, passions and many other aspects of yourself. Well, last time I checked writing was a great releasing mechanism and should be used by everyone. As always, it was a joy to read you. :)

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      SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

      Ballerina with pink parasol

      in black tights and tutu

      a boyhood fantasy

      lured into the web

      of a black widow spider :)

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      "it was a joy to read you. :)" why does that feel a little like you looked at my ass comming from you cags? lmao!

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      Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

      Maybe you're just a tad self conscious? LOL! However, it's always a pleasure to read your writing and when I do read your writing, I read you. You usually apply feelings and passion, and even frustration to your writing by the words that you use. You invoke emotion and responses. What else would you like me to say. I read YOU! ;)

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      nope, still feels sexual lol.

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      Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

      Maybe that's just you then. I think you might want to take care of the bent up thought. LOL! :P

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, well talk lmao

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      You never cease to amaze me lady pink! Comparing writing to an amazing dance form of art. Ballet has to be one of the hardest most graceful forms of dance and you write it so easily with your pen. You dance when you write and you shine when you dance!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      ya know nikki if i was into having a woman life partner...lol. anyway, did i spell pliet right? spellcheck didnt give me anything, just said it was spelled wrong.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      by the way SilentReed, you didnt go unnoticed... :) .

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...oh dear - how much I do love this - as you may recall I simply adore the classical ballet and have loved it all of my life - well just like I have loved you dear Steph and your world class writing all of my hub life .....lake erie time ontario canada 5:39pm and I must post this beauty to my FACEBOOK page with a direct link back here with pride and honor - and by the way - when do I get the chance to see you in a tutu - oh be still - my beating heart!!!!!

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      saddlerider1 5 years ago

      Amazing talent you are a gift. I am sitting here after having written an Erotica poem, which I struggled with in my darkness. I am romantic, yet not often does my inner self get revealed. I was up to the challenge thus

      "Breathing You" came forth. Yes the pen does spill the ink and sometimes maybe even most times it get's it's fill from our souls. I enjoyed this scribe, you danced well, yet I sensed with a broken wing. Hugs to you my fine poet.

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      mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

      AWESOME!!!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      your an inspiration colin, luv you.

      saddlerider- i can see the romance in you.

      mikielikie- THANKS! LOL

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      seicheprey 5 years ago

      Fantastic as always.:)

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      Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

      I love this.. it is therapy to write.. I couldn't agree with you more about the need and the power you get from it.

      Fantastic.. voted up and awesome!

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      Tim Mitchell 5 years ago from Escondido, CA

      OK, I was doing fine, then you caught me. You reeled me in as if it were the catch of the day. Then, like the angler, you threw me into that bucket of water on the little rickety, wooden dock.

      It was at 'double edged bullshit' that I bit upon that hook. Like the Tasmanian Devil, I tore a path to your profile only to discover I had not only been caught, but fell beyond the looking glass.

      First as you, I offer a warning, even though I perused some of your talented work, seeking to understand, there are no comments. I'll quote a good friend the white rabbit, "I'm late! For a very important date! No time to say hello, goodbye! I'm late! I'm late! I'm late!" And, I desired to read from beginning to end, completely. But, this time I did play Swan's Lake.

      Still contemplating, I realized you caught me again. Though enticed with the magical mystery tour of ballet, the meaning strikes hard like mighty Thor's hammer. Swan's Lake is silent, yet the internet radio has chosen to play 'Safety Dance' by 'Men Without Hats.' And, is there meaning, I dun'no.

      Meaning , , ,an objective view of this work 'the pink umbrella.' Subjective, I haven't the words, yet. Right now I am lost with the title. I'm weird, I know, but I see 'passanger' and I most definitely read passenger, never giving thought, until now.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      wow tsmog, thats a serious comment. be careful around that looking glass...its been known to swallow some whole. So are you trying to find meaning in my title? The passenger is the hunger that lives inside to push out the writing. i hope you come back and read more.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      The picture and video are very nice so are your words. Your word-pictures are very beautiful as the dance moves. I can hear music within the lines.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank you, and thank you so much for reading me!

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Beautiful images you speak into my heart. Dance with me please, I may step on your toes, but I will do my best to be graceful

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      you may have this dance, JL. ;)

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Great, cause I have been waiting to hear the accent again.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, youre the one with the accent, my friend.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Oh yeah, Southern Californian heehhaa. Like dude

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      or south jersey, whateeeveeer lol

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      You made me laugh, thank you

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      palyabuz 5 years ago from Turkey

      beautiful...thanks.

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      Your words are bent but held in precision "like the arms of a ballerina". Great write "pinkum".

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      awe, i bet you say that to all the girls...lol

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      i enjoyed this very much. "Double edged bullshit" was an unexpected turn of phrase. Well done!

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      Lola1929 5 years ago from Oregon

      Absolutely beautiful...as are you. Love from Lola.

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      zzron 5 years ago from Houston, TX.

      Ever so beautifully cool. I like the part that says dancing to the music inside her.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks lennon zzron lol.

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      PI-UM,

      Still got it kid, its actually like you've gotten better...hard to imagine.

      TH

      pIUM

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      Kenneth Avery 5 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      The pink umbrella, Voted up and way on this masterpiece. Soaked up every word. YOU, my talented friend, are so good that I am in awe. Thanks for sharing this heart-touching piece. I am sorr for not being here sooner. My health isnt good. But I will try to be back more often. I thank and value YOU as a follower and a friend. Merry Christmas! Kenneth!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Kenneth A- Thank you so much. Im truely sorry to hear that your health isnt so good. Likewise, i valuse you as well. And merry christmas yourself.

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      Kenneth Avery 5 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      12/9/2011

      pink umbrella, you are very welcome. I may not be a rocket scientist, but I can recognize sharp talent and you are that...a sharp talent. Keep up your fine work and may you touch lots of lives. Yes, I want you to go far in your writing. But keep in mind that I always support you in whatever you choose to write about.

      Have a Merry Christmas and a PeaceFILLED 2012.

      Kenneth

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