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Beautiful sense of imagery.

Beautiful poem for National Poetry Month, Audrey!

You are my favorite poet.

You bring such atmosphere to your poetry; this is beautiful, Audrey.

Ann

Well done Audrey with your first poem for poetry month. Nice stuff.

A stunning piece of writing, lovely words, thanks, Lee

Net empty, but my soul full... love the poem Audrey

What a beautiful sea of images.

Audrey, great first poem. Very emotional and engaging. I am excited to read more! Jamie

Happy poetry month, Audrey. This is a beautiful write and quite thought provoking. I am going to enjoy reading your poetry this month.

Amazing. Each line draws upon the last. A wonderful way to start Poetry Month!

Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

Hello Audrey,

I always look forward to this month because I know you will be putting forth an enormous effort to write a poem per day which is a treat for me and many others here. Your first poem is beautiful and speaks to me of emotionally- detached memories. Although

open to interpretation, I love your work!

All the best,

Cat:)

Audrey, wow, what a beautiful and amazing poem to kick off National Poetry Month.

Interesting poem. Made me think of a fishing trip trying to clear your mind or come up with a rational answer to life's mysteries but coming up empty.

Thanks for a great start on National Poetry Month. You set a high standard!

An interesting poem for sure. It makes you think.

Have a Blessed Easter.

Absolutely awesome! National Poetry month, eh? Cool!

Beautiful tangle of words strung together.

Incredible poem Audrey. I love the imagery in it.

I see a lonely empty net, like some lives. Good job, Audrey.

I see a reincarnated spider. Excellent imagery

Audrey, just stunning imagery - a tinge of sadness in those tucked away cobwebbed dreams - well it fits my interpretation!

I loved your contributions to National Poetry Month last year, Audrey, and I'm looking forward to this year's poems. This is a very interesting one to start with. I'll be thinking about its imagery for some time!

I so like your analagy. Nicely done.

Simply awesome !