Virtuality Of Life
What is life like?
Is it beautiful or fearful ?
Its like nature
which can cause disaster
but is glorious
Its like rose
has fragrance, is beautiful
but either has thorns
Its like Earth
12 hours bright day
and 12 the dark night
See the brighter side; life is beautiful
but darkness either you have ought to taste
Life is beautiful and even fearful :)
Comments
AUTHORTHANK U kamalesh..!!
I like the poem. It's Beautiful. Keep on writing !
Best Wishes, Kamalesh
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thank u jodah! sure !
Another enjoyable poem sudiksha. I hope you write many more.
itsmesudiksha,life is of course beautiful though it s fearful. but at some points we would stand quizzically towards it ...but here am not doubted to say your work is beautiful. congratulations...!
You are welcome dear. Go on writing this beautiful, each will be appreciated.
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Eemily,
Thank you so much for appriciating and understanding. :)
exactly! life is never same sometimes happiness then some times sadness either. Well written and nice examples.
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thank u so much #Sam it really feels good to know that people appreciate my poem thank u :)
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thank you #rajkumar :)
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haha! #Beena writing poem is my hobby but my aim is to be lawyer may be it is better to be poet but what i want to be is lawyer :)
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thank u rusma
I like how you started your poem "Virtuality of Life" with two questions, than defining the meaning of life, and finally your take of the "Virtuality of Life" meaning it could be bitter or sweet have to live to see.
so nice i like it
It's really an excellent poem. I think it's better to be a poet rather than being a lawyer. Am I RIGHT or LEFT? You tell me.??
really well defined about the depth of life in this short poem
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either u write better than me :) thank u :) garima
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thank u so much samyukta.. :)
You have a creative way to express your poems! Keep writing.
Life is beautiful; that's true. It has problems so has the power to over come it, it depends upon you how you live it like. Great poem; it surely defines what's life like.
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