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Wintry Night: A Poem

Updated on November 24, 2009
Lovers embrace by Mindless Afternoon Courtesy of Flickr
Lovers embrace by Mindless Afternoon Courtesy of Flickr

Wintry Night

In the midst of a wintry night, a love unfurrowed to take flight.

A glance shot beside the fire is all it took to ignite this desire.

The desire, bright and hot, as a flare led to this fervor we share.

For a moment this whole world revolves around this boy and girl.

 

 

From your attention my heart does sing so sure of this ardent thing

Splashing into amour like the waves dance upon the golden shore

Like the butterfly in my stomach flaps its wings, oh what elation this brings.

From the ceiling to the floor I say to you “I want more.”

For you my love I so adore.

 

 

Entranced by the gentle sway of your breast as I gaze at the rising of your chest.

They seem to beg to be free but not here where everyone can see

To my chamber we decide and I’ll take you to paradise

You trot ahead with glee as I plot out your wildest fantasy

My beds the ocean moving as a notion of our endless motion.

 

 

In this moment of sensuous play an eternity I’d like to stay

Of your innocence so sweet etched is the memory of your heat

The love you give makes me high that my breath escapes in a sigh.

The smoothness of your skin has me living in sin

And your hair so soft and fair falls over me without a care

The act, never wrong with a passion so complete and strong.

 

 

Absorbed in enthusiasm you give a quick spasm

Oh I’ve found the magic spot and I give it all I’ve got

Your eyes to mine with a stare hold on babe we’re almost there

Pressure builds to astound, ecstasy my love, we have found

We fall back into the bed in my arms upon my chest you lay your head

Silence settles o'er the night, like this we stay until the morning light.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Well Done My Friend, Good read flows well and gives the imagination a real boost. Hoooah!

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Thanks hmrjmr, glad you enjoyed it.

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      dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

      Great stuff, Wesley! This was my favorite line:

      The smoothness of your skin has me living in sin

      Great alliteration. Thumbs up!

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Hey Dohn, glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Have you been taking lessons from me or what? This is some good stuff son.

      'Entranced by the gentle sway of your breast as I gaze at the rising of your chest.' so er, moving

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Thanks for stopping by Ralwus, I am glad that you like the poem, thought I'd try something a little lighter than my usual. Had to soften it quite a bit though.

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      breakfastpop 7 years ago

      Great poetry. Hope all is well.

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      Pachuca213 7 years ago

      OMG, I think I need to take a shower now! lol This was so titilating and exciting...also the photo above helped the mood!

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Thank you Pachuca, my inspiration for this one is my wife. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by.

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      myownworld 7 years ago from uk

      now that was so intense it left me almost breathless! gooorgeous, is all I can say! more please!! ;)

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Ah myownworld, glad you liked the poem. I will need my muse with me to do anymore though. Thanks for visiting.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      you are a lovely person...... really you are, what a nice poem, for your wife, has she read it or do i not even go there. I am so proud of your poetry, i could not write anything like that, i really could not

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      She actually did just read it and she loved it. Thank you for reading my poems PL as I appreciate all the positive feedback you've given me. What was your favorite line?

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      i like the first line of the third verse, and all that verse, probably because it is so typical of a man's re action to a womans body..... she would like that you were deriving much pleasure from her. I am glad she read it, and i hope she keeps on reading your work, i have told you before you are special, and you will keep improving, well done........

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      Justine76 7 years ago

      oh, wow. There are really men who care about the pleasure of ohters? And did I read that right, its for your wife?

      How lovely!!!! Lucky girl...

      my favourite line was..."You trot ahead with glee as I plot out your wildest fantasy"

      that you would be thinking of her is what casues you so much joy...fantastic!!

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Thanks again, I enjoyed writing that one very much as well. Honestly, I'm trying to mimic Poe's musicality of his poems. Getting closer I think, plus ralwus has it down pat I think.

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Justine: I thank you very much for this lovely comment, besides the focus of this act should be on the other person. Yes indeed you read right, it is for my wife as I wrote it for her and while thinking of her. And I am the lucky one. Thank you for reading, commenting, and enjoying this poem.

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      Justine76 7 years ago

      :) happy for you!!!

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      Azur Moon Wolf 7 years ago

      Very well done...again. Innocent (and not so) and passionate - you've captured the way true lovers should feel.

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Azur thank you for the nice comments and I'm glad that you felt it was innocent and passionate as that was what I was going for.

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      manlypoetryman 7 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Great One...Wesleycox! It takes the reader into this very intimate moment with astonishing-calm and cool-deliberate detail. Reads very well...and I see your work has gathered many fine Hubbers to comment approvingly. Add me to the list of folks who are impressed with your Poetry. This was some remarkable Poetry!

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      MPM: You have effectively humbled me by those kind words of praise. I only hope that I can continue to live up to expectations and continue to improve my poetry. There are still many more styles I've yet to try and look forward to attempting them. Again thank you for you kind words of approval.

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      This was an excellent poem Wesley. Very graphic, but tasteful. : ) I'll be jumping into a cold shower now! ; )

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      brandonfan: Thank you for reading and enjoying this poem.

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      BEAUTYBABE 7 years ago from QUEENSLAND AUSTRALIA.

      Hi Wesley,

      I loved your poem, it was truly beautiful the way you described just what a loving relationship you have with your wife. I could feel your love for her coming through in many ways. Even though you did describe very grafically some of the details, you did manage to do it quite tasefully and that is why it was so special to me and I felt your love for her in it so strongly Wesley. I have been dabbling in a bit of poetry myself, but still have a long way to go. You are very good and I am going to read some more, of which I will like again of this I am sure. Thank you and have a lovely Christmas BB

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      BB: I thank you very much for your lovely words of praise for my poem.

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      bcr 7 years ago

      totally adolescent

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      Terrilyn Lum 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      What a passionate and beautiful poem! Keep'em coming :).

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Telynisblessed: Thank you for your comments, I am glad that you enjoyed it.

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      just came back to be inspired by your work, my poor dad is so sick, every day he gets worse..... He has scarring on the lung, and cannot get his breath, heartbreaking. I go over Thursday of next week to look after him till Sunday, to give my sister a break

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      wesleycox 7 years ago from Back in Texas, at least until August 2012

      Joy thanks for reading again and I am glad that you like it enough to re read it. I am so sorry to hear about your father though. Hoping everything works out for you.

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      LanaLu 5 years ago from New York

      beautiful Poem

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