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Your green saree

Updated on September 24, 2011
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For that one minute of memory
i can write thousands of poem...

When i saw you in that green Saree my sweet dream comes to my mind. That day you weared the same colour of Saree in front of me and god make my dream comes true. My wishes are being closer to my heart and more close to my real life. God just bless me and my motti that we can face all the obstacles.

Love you my barbie Dall just seeing your green saree.



IN YOUR GREEN SAREE
I WANT TO SEE YOU AS MINE
BEAUTIFUL SMILE IN YOUR FACE
YOUR LONG BLONDE HAIR
AND YOUR FAIR SKIN



IN YOUR GREEN SAREE
I WANT TO CARESS YOUR
I DON'T CARE HOW THE
OTHERS ARE THERE...
YOU SHINING LIKE THE
GRACEFUL MOON........
IN ALL AMONG THE
GROUP OF STARS..........


HOW TRADITIONAL MY LOVE IS
LIKE YOUR ATTIRE THAT INTOXICATES MY MIND.....
I CAN'T CONTROL MY HEART
ITS PUSHING ME TO LOVE YOU AGAIN AND AGAIN......



YOUR SMILE IS SO CUTE AND SUITS THE SAREE
THE FALL IS BEAUTIFUL AND ALSO YOUR EAR RINGS
YOUR NECKLACE AND NOSE PIN
YOUR MATCHING BANGLES...
OOPS I AM GOING CRAZY......



YOU WILL THINK FOR ONE MINUTE OF ME
WHEN YOU WEAR YOUR GREEN SAREE NEXT TIME
JUST WEAR THE GREEN SAREE SOMEDAY
IN FRONT OF ME ONCE AGAIN....



I WISH I COULD TALK TILL THE END OF MY LIFE
BUT NOW I AM RUNNING OUT OF THE THINGS TO SAY
SO I 'LL END BY THE LINE YOU ALREADY KNOW
"I LOVE YOU" MORE THAN WHAT I COULD SHOW.....






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      mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

      Thanks Freya Cesare and Thanks too Angelme for your comments.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      This is so romantic.. I like Saree but this green Saree can be more beautiful if it is a color Pink Saree,,what do you think writer ?

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      Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      You are very romantic person. This is so sweet. Beautiful. ^_^

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      mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

      Thanks @Fennelseed

      Thanks @Cresentmoo

      She is really beautiful cresentmoon. Her hair , her feet and her hands are so beautiful. She is "samaika sunderi".

      Samaika sunderi is someone who looks beautiful in some seasons. :)

      Thanks @Zabbella for stopping here and putting your view.

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      Zabbella 5 years ago from NJ-USA

      Green is my favorite color also. You write with so much passion! You let this reader know how deep your love is and that keeps me reading!

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      Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI

      That is so sweet that you wrote this for someone so special. No matter how anyone else views her, all that matters is how you see her.

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      Green is my most favourite colour in the world, so I can image your love in a beautiful green saree. A very special image created in your beautiful poem.

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      mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

      Once i saw a dream where she weared the same green saree and i just found my dream in true. I love her so much that's why god make my dream to real. I am so happy now. I don't care if she hate me or not. I will love her and will be with her till the end of my life. She will be with me always.

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      mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

      ha-ha Thanks @ nenytridiana . I don't know what she did . I don't know how much she smiled after seeing the poem. I don't know anything. I have not seen her smile before thousands of years. She hate me now and don't want to see my face. I am nothing for her. But she is everything for me.

      You the friends have a ear. You can listen my heart , can feel my love but what is she !!!!!!!!!!!!

      She just hate me .I got a snap from Facebook from one of her friend's account. There she weared a green saree and looks so beautiful. I took a print screen and save it on my laptop. now that's on my background image. I don't know why people says she is not beautiful , i don't know why people says she has big eyes. But she is my angel. She is my barbie doll. She is my love.

      I saw that snap and can't control myself to write a poem . i am not a good writer i know . but i wrote it only for her. She didn't replied once how is this poem or how all the poems are. I love her a lot. can't say actually how much because i can't say. i can just smile ,i can just fell.

      I love you a lot motti.

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      nenytridiana 5 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

      This is sweet mottiandbander. whoever she was, she will be flattered.

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      mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

      Thanks @ Seeker .I am really happy that my wishes ,my dreams are with me. I want to keep it close to my heart.

      Once i saw a dream of her that she wears a green saree in front of me and thanks to god he make my dream comes true. I got a snap of her where she wears same color of saree with ear ring , a nose pin and also matching bangles with her friends.

      I can't control my self to do it . You are so beautiful in that green saree motti.

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      Helen Murphy Howell 5 years ago from Fife, Scotland

      This is a lovely poem and so cheery! I reaqlly enjoyed reading this. Voted up + beautiful.