Your love is like the ocean
Your love is like the ocean
All things that I adore
But like the tides
You come and go
My heart the waiting shore
Arms open wide
Your love flows in
To feel joy at my side
But bitter sweet is your embrace
Too soon you run and hide
Back and forth in a cruel game
Your love moves like the sea
Watching you pulled far away
Praying you'll return to me
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Glad to hear it, Jon. I look forward to your email.
- AUTHOR
Hey Shauna , not your fault at all I've been busy too and have not been around much !!! Sav has been home for the holidays :)
And I had a writers block too !!!
I'll email soon for a quick lowdown of my crazy life LOL
But spirits are high and feeling strong :)
Love ya !!!
Simba xxx
Hey, Jon! It feels like forever since we've touched base; my fault, not yours! I love the beginning of this poem. I can relate. I can also relate to the ending. My heart has given up on finding true love. I feel yours is still yearning. That's a good thing.
Love Ya My Friend!
Shauna
- AUTHOR
Hattie,
thanks for reading and I thought that you of all may like this one, you know the sea well too :)
Simba
ha...ha...love the poem, and love reading someone that can see how emotions ebb and flow like the waves. :)
- AUTHOR
Thanks GRL :)
Lifes full of these frustratons I just blast out whats in my head LOL
Simba xxx
This was so beautiful and sweet but also kinda sad. Liked this lots. Passing it on.
"Back and forth in a cruel game
Your love moves like the sea" ....i love these lines.
But the tide always comes back which is promising. Also, the attraction back to the shore depends from the pull of the moon. You can be the moon too pulling her back towards your direction. Do well always, my friend. She could change her mind one day.
Very nice significant poetry! Another good one. Sharing.
- AUTHOR
fpherj48
Thanks so much for your kind words, your visits give me a good boost to my spirits every time :)
Love Simba xxx
Simba.......You have expressed the reality of your pain and dilemma with perfection....like the tides, she comes and goes.......but like the ocean, your love is deep and constant. This plants the seed that will grow....to bring her home to stay.
- AUTHOR
Hay Faith !!
Great comment thanks so much :)
And btrbell thanks again for dropping in and readin :)
Love you guys
Simba xxx
Perfect analogy! I love it! Another great one!
I love how you used the ocean to describe that sometimes back and forth flooding in and then receding back, which only happens when one or the other is not really sure of how true the other is, maybe due to his or her actions or lack thereof. In that scenario, really one has no choice but to recede as the ocean's tides. However, if one has no doubt, then it would be like a full on force of a tsunami . . . no way to stop it.
Really nice one. Voted up God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper
You are welcome ;)
- AUTHOR
thank you ladyfiddler :)
Simba
Very nice like the description .
Have a splendid weekend ;)
GOD bless U
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