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Giving you the key

Updated on February 19, 2011

You own my heart

Crime in givin' it away for free

Not much value in what was me

Closed account went bone dry

The easy way wins, just say goodbye

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Once the beggar, a willing detainee

My heart not present, in absentee

Repeat the mantra, I will not cry

The easy way wins, just say goodbye

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Served a purpose, my crime spree

Kept my heart under lock and key

Beat the others at game of belie

The easy way wins, just say goodbye

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Karma, the bitch, collects her fee

My turn in the game as her payee

My love for you, no, I cannot deny

No easy way now, don't say goodbye

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Let's make a pact, you and me

No cloak and dagger sets us free

For you, my daughter, I would die

Not a way, ever, never goodbye

You are perfect to me - WARNING - adult content

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      Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      I am enjoying your walk down the halls of my first steps into poetry, Colin. This journey is so uniquely, contemplatively Colin. You have incredible soul and the heart of a lion, Mister C, and I feel lucky to know it. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the loving care you gift to me.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ... well my dear Amy the writing Gods gave you the 'key' a long time ago and for me it was when I first read you over 2 years ago at the Hub.

      You have the heart of a poetic sage and mind of an intrepid cultural and sociological explorer, forever restless, in searching for the answers, and often only offering your readers more questions, but here lies the 'key' for you are making us think and feel and debate these issues and concerns which are so very important to you - lake erie time 8:59am with 2nd cup of coffee and some night classical choral music from the baroque era

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      And I've only just begun. You give me the impetus to forge on, sword in hand! I've been holding back, but it sounds like I needn't. Thank you for giving me more courage than I knew I had.

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      Mohan Kumar 7 years ago from UK

      'Karma, the bitch, collects her fee

      My turn in the game as her payee'

      Brutal, honest, scathing and sensational. You are fire and ice, you blow my mind with such constructions. I am glad these poems aren't written on parchment. They'll burn a hole! wow!

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Thank you, Micky Dee!

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Very nice as always.

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Hi, BobbiRant! So glad to see you. Thank you for your unflagging support. I missed you, my friend.

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      BobbiRant 7 years ago from New York

      That fickle thing we call Karma. I really liked this very much. Haunting, compelling and so much meaning and passion. Lovely.

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      breakfastpop, thank you for your generous comment. You made my day...aw, hell, my week!

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      breakfastpop 7 years ago

      Your poem blew me away. I need to read it again and again. It has a rhythm all its own. Up and awesome!

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Augustine, Yes, exactly...one key for two sets of locks. I'm greedy and want both kinds of love. Thank you for coming by and the welcome back. Missed you.

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      Augustine A Zavala 7 years ago from Texas

      Karma is a bitch! However, in due time Karma will pay back your due to thee. Love is the key that opens two different sets of locks, one for your lover, and one for your daughter. Thank you for sharing and thank you for ending your hiatus.

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      mccrawford76, thank you for your thoughtful commentary. Although love is the most driving force I know, and the love of a lover...powerful, dynamic, compelling and desired, the love of a parent for their child is in a different category. It is hard to disentangle enough to fully comprehend the overwhelming scope of emotions, much less describe. I know that my love for my daughter envelopes every fiber of my being all day everyday. I believe that is a universal emotion.

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      Matthew I Crawford 7 years ago from Greeley, Colorado

      Always knowing the bond of family is stronger than that of love. A very powerful poem, separating yourself from your lovers and strenghening the bond of love of your daughter. Nice.

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Thank you, my friend. You are looking great. It's so good to see your beautiful face. Thank you for your support, Martie.

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      Martie Coetser 7 years ago from South Africa

      This is touching lyrics, Amy. Voted UP in all ways. It is so nice to have you back :))))

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      No_Clue, I'll give you a clue, friend, you've made my day! My sincere thanks.

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      Amy, your video, combined with your poem brought me to tears! OMG! I got a knot in my gut the size of Houston! You are awesome!

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      I'm glad I put the warning since your sweet little grandson is with you. Thank you so much for your comments, Fay. My hope is that you love the video, too, as much as I do. I found it after I composed my piece and it says, musically perfect, my intent.

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      Fay Paxton 7 years ago

      I'll come back and listen to the video :).

      I didn't want to wait another moment to tell you how superb this poem is. I love the rhythm, the pace and the rhyme. Just perfect.

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      Amy Becherer 7 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      No_Clue, your commentary leaves me speechless except to say thank you.

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      No_Clue 7 years ago

      A most gripping, flowing piece, here! Left me speechless! Your rhyme and flow are awesome, your message staggering! Wow!

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