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Things aren't always as they appear on the surface.

Updated on February 28, 2013
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Under the surface.

Things aren’t always as they appear on the surface.



A one story flat with ivy galore,

beautifully crafted stain glass door.

A porch that wraps around out of view,

diverting eyes, the scenes all askew.

Under the surface is a woman’s cries,

Ugly purple bruises surround her once beautiful eyes.



A little girl with bouncy blonde curls,

glistening like cornsilk as she twirls.

Laughing and dancing to her hearts delight

diverting eyes, tears fill the dark of night.

Under the surface is a child’s worse fears,

evil has been creeping beneath her covers for years.



A little old man fishing on the side of the creek,

you see him there most days of the week.

Casting his line with precision and flair

diverting eyes, to whats not there.

Under the surface is a grown mans grief,

for the woman who’s passed, there is no relief.



A teenage girl with talent and spirit,

captain of the cheer team, everyones favorite.

Petite and adorned in fancy new clothes

diverting eyes, from being exposed.

Under the surface is a young girls disease,

purging herself for perfection, yet never really pleased.



A young man with promise of a sports scholarship,

with muscles and brains, smart as a whip.

Jumping and scoring, applause and cheers

diverting eyes, from paranoid stares.

Under the surface is a young boys addiction

for the drugs he has chosen, reckless demise is his mission.



Things aren't always as they appear on the surface.


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    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Ga, I think we all are guilty of judging a book by it's cover at least some of the time! Thanks for stopping by!

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      gaplumber 

      5 years ago

      Wow, very very insightful, that one will make me think.

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Epi, you have no idea how nice it is to come home after a long day of work and see your smiling face and read your always encouraging comments! You truly are a gem! A heart felt thank you from your biggest fan!

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      epigramman 

      5 years ago

      I love how the entire theme is connected together through each of your poetic vignettes and your narrative course taken here is just excellent in conveying the meaning of your title. I envisioned each little story and character in my cinema mind and was quite moved by how well of this came together. Hubbravo from the epi-man - this piece really rocks but also tells a sad truth about certain people hiding behind their masks.

      I admire how you can tackle tough issues and given them life through your always marvelous writing.

      Sending a big Canadian high five from Colin and his cats who have gone back to bed after their feeding - and after I eat my pork roast with gravy and vegetables, lol, I just might do the same.

      lake erie time ontario canada 9:54am

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you Curiad!

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      Mark G Weller 

      5 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      This is very well done, and the message is loud and clear!

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you Miss Jamie!

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      MissJamieD 

      5 years ago from Minnes-O-ta

      This is a beautiful poem! So very well written, I love it:) Great job!

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you, That line 'is' about my father, we lost my mother last January. If you have time, check out my latest hub, I wrote it for him. Thank you again for the kind words.

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      Cathy 

      5 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

      This was absolutely well written. The emotion and visuals evoked by you language as well as the tempo was certainly effective. I especially liked the lines, "Under the surface is a grown mans grief, for the woman who’s passed, there is no relief" because they reminded me of my father. Thumbs up.

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you both, I appreciate your comments!

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      Grant Coleman 

      5 years ago from Ohio

      Nice work! And thanks for reading my hub, we are addressing a very similar topic in two very different ways...

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      poojasd7 

      5 years ago from India

      Very profound! I thank Bill for sharing this verse on fb. I really enjoyed reading this. You are very creative and your thinking has a depth. :-)

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Your welcome Mhatter!

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      Bravo! Masterfully done. Right of coarse. Thank you for this.

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you Kj, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading your works as well!

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      kjforce 

      5 years ago from Florida

      wildove5...This was the first time I have read any of your writes...I found this to be awesome..your words depicted a picture that most people do not see..or sometimes " choose NOT to see "..as seeing may constitute involvement.....however..many times we fail to see the warning signs...great write and I look forward to reading more of your work...

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you very much, I am humbled to be in the company of such kind people!

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      Mary Hyatt 

      5 years ago from Florida

      I do agree: things are not always the way they seem. A lot of people go through life with a mask on trying to hid their true feelings.

      Voted this UP, etc.

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      C L Grant 

      5 years ago from United Kingdom

      OMG! ! I'm not normally a 'poem' person but this is truly a talented piece of work.

      It's also a rather a poignant reminder that things are not always as they seem on the surface.

      Voted up and beautiful!

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      lovedoctor926 

      5 years ago

      Wow! Amazing piece and much food for thought. Appearances can be deceiving! We must walk a mile in that person's shoes before judging others. Thanks Billy for introducing us to this hubber.

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Wow, I'm speechless, thank you all for the praise and kind words. A big thank you to you Billy for sharing on FB. It's people like you all that inspire me to continue writing.

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      Sheri Dusseault 

      5 years ago from Chemainus. BC, Canada

      Beautiful! I could see this as lyrics to a song. Congrats!

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      Wayne Barrett 

      5 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Wow. Excellent piece. Sometimes a smile is just an upside down frown!

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      Bill Holland 

      5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Marco Polo....it speaks about the same thing but in a different way. :)

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      CrisSp 

      5 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Great piece! Thanks to billybuc for sharing this on FB or I would have missed it. Great words, great flow and great message. Very powerful!

      Voting up, beautiful and absolutely sharing and pinning!

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      Bob Karaszi 

      5 years ago

      Very nice. I like this a lot. Nicely done.

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      Joanne M Olivieri 

      5 years ago

      Excellent work. Very well done.

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Bill, whats the title, you have so many!

    • wildove5 profile imageAUTHOR

      wildove5 

      5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

      Thank you, I will have to check out yours!

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      Bill Holland 

      5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Excellent work! Just a beautiful message and reminds me of a hub I wrote a couple weeks ago. I love this poem! Sharing it with my writing groups on Facebook.

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