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You Make Me Sparkle

Updated on July 13, 2011

One More Time

I sit here in awe as you did it again

I have written down the things that make my love so strong

Then in a stroke of wrong

It was all gone

I was too hasty and I erased so many sensuous words that left my lips

Only to disappear with one wrong stroke

That took my most passionate writings into the a blackhole

To be swollowed up by the unknown

Now I go from memory what I jut spent hours trying to convey

How my life is so silly but so wonderful today

I look deep into my spirit and find a love that through all my wrong turns and misguided steps

Has survived test after test

For this is the love that will last after the sun comes up and finds away to sneak away again

Only to remind me life goes on

I sit hear in early July trying to tell you the feelings I feel that send my emotions reeling in for more

I can count the days that have been good

I can tell you of all the things that we have done

In the end in comes down to one thing

Pleasing her

Who satisfies me with new and wonderful joys

I can never return to the life that I lived before

Since this life is so much more

My senses are always tricked into believing this feeling will never end

Then I experience the fun that turns into estatic pleasure

I am always seeking new ways to savor it all

The wonders I see when love calls

There is nothing hard about loving someone with only one thing in mind

Seeing them pleased with every smile that you can deliver

When days and nights roll into one

Each day is a new experience of delight

I just take a small step in the right direction to get my feet wet

Then I wonder what makes my insides tickle with passion

For is it her eyes that look back at me with such deep loyalty ?

I think it could be the trust of everything we do together

It doesn't always come out the way we expected it to be

As we take notice what has happened

We hold each other close

We have found the way to make the most of every undesirable situation

Holding hands and dreaming of better days

When all my words don't fill my endless search for answers

I know it has to be you that I am looking for

To make me complete in a way I can't understand

As I hold a single rose in my hand

It is one simple way to say I love you

All the pedals so delicate to the touch

Each one may fall at any moment and change it's beauty

But together they form a cluster of tantilizing pleasure

Where all the pedals are joined together at one end

So they can reach out to the world to embrace love that will return again and again

This rose I pass into your hands

As a symbol of friendship,compassion and deep desire

To see that our love will never expire


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    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      6 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick Not as good as the one who has to decipher what it is I am talking about.I float on air and any second I can sink to the bottom.Where I go I never know.I laugh that I have come this far.Thanx so much for hanging in there.

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 

      6 years ago from Great Britain

      Everything you write has a beauty of its own.

      That´s why you´re so good.

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      7 years ago

      Charlu You find your way into my thoughts.Thanks for sharing and blessing me with your company.Have a great day.Movie Master For someone to read my poem once I am thrilled.To read the same poem again I am estatic.To read the same poem again I have to be dreaming and I am not sure I want to wake up.Thanx for the joy.

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      Movie Master 

      7 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi Dream on, I have read your poem several times now, there is so much here to obsorb and enjoy, thank you for a beautiful poem.

    • Charlu profile image


      7 years ago from Florida

      You have a way of getting me out of "self" sometimes which is sometimes a needed venture. Awesome poem as always and voted that way

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      7 years ago

      Schoolmarm All I can do is try. I put alot of time in them and I know they still need more improvement.I learn as I go.I push to get them written because if I wait till they our perfect they will never be done.I appreciate all your wonderful support. I hope your excitement triples mine.Get the most out of your day by doing it your way.

    • schoolmarm profile image


      7 years ago from Florida

      You write such beautiful poems! Thanks


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