Our God is loving
Our God is loving
Here is my first attempt at poetry,
It started with a question from one of my kids,
then this is what came out:
Our God is loving
He is also Holy, Righteous,
and Just
He will not tolerate sin
and rebellion
Free will is a must
Some may think
that He is unfair
He is who
He is without
a doubt,
He truly does care
He judges us not based
upon how much
we have or how
much we accomplish
If we choose t
he house of
the LORD
We will always flourish
We are His creation
He gives us the choice
Lay down everything
we own then we
will forever rejoice
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CMerrit, voted up a fine poem, I'll gladly read another, Stay Blessed, 50
Good Morning, I voted up when I woke up. A fine piece of work, but I have a feeling it was more praise than work.
are you sure this is your first because for a first its pretty good
Even though it won't become cannonized it could meet the criteria to become 2 Psalms chapter 1!
Along with the thought from your message, CMerrit, is the fact that God wants everyone to be saved. He would prefer that everyone was a believer. Voted up.
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Thanks Dusty, Not sure when the next one will come along, but I appreciate your thoughts.
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rommergrot,
Thanks for stopping by, and yes, it did have more to do with praise than anything.
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jasper420, yes it is my first, well first since I had to do one in Middle School.
Thanks for the compliment.
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Fred, you made my day, I thank you for your kind remark.
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Diamond, that was part of the discussion by my kids that instigated my thoughts for the poem...they wondered WHY God just didn't make us all believers. The we talked about the whole Free Will.
Thanks for you stopping by and the kind remarks.
great job! keep it up!
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Thanks AR
:)
Nice hub,nice poetry. Thanks for sharing it. Blessings to you.
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Thank you cristina for stopping by and the kind words.
you have a natural poet in you. stay blessed.
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lynp, if I do, I never knew it. another hubber encouraged me to give it a try. I thank you for your very kind words.
I love this poem. This is shown your spirituality side and I believe that God love you so much. Thanks for share with us. I give my Vote to you. Have a nice day.
Blessing and hugs,
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pasetio, I believ God loves us all, and I give thanks to Him, for allowing me to open up myself enough to put some words together and call it a poem.
I very much appreciate your kind words, and may you have a nice day as well.
This is lovely. I voted up and beautiful:)
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Thank you very much Emily. God gave me the words.
cute lil hub . GOD IS GREAT ALL THE TIME
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Thanks for you kind remarks and YES, I agree...GOD IS GREAT ALL THE TIME.
Thanks for stopping by ladyjojo
Lay it all down CMerritt! God bless!
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Thank you very kindly Mick, It is appreciated.
Your first attempt at poetry is a work of art! I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing your creative talents.
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James, any creative talents that I have with poetry HAS to be given to God, because that is the only way I could ever be poetic. These words were inspired, and I give God ALL credit and praise Him for allowing me to use words to express my thoughts.
I really appreciate it when you stop by and comment.
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CMerritt, Lovely and wonderfully expressed! Thank You for sharing, Peace & Blessings!
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Thanks Debra, Peace and Blessings to you also.
I really appreciate your comments.
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Great poem to start the day :)
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Thank you Christine.... :)
Love Ya :)
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Love ya too Mindy!
:)
What a beautiful way to pay respect. Well done.
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Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
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Yes we've just experienced another typical example of your god's (ahem) love LOL!
Ask the Japanese and tourists that managed to survive recently. LOL!
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Composer, He is Holy, Righteous, and Just......His Love is for those who, with their own free will, choose to accpet Him....to have an eternal life with Him.
The evil and bad that we face everyday is the natural course of a sinful world that we ALL endure. It is the life AFTER we leave this world is what having a realtionship with God is all about.
THE BEAUTY OF GOD’S LOVE By BERNARD LEVINE
God is amazing
He chooses every baby's DNA and blood type
He puts every star in place to float in the sky
He creates every fingerprint with a rare design
He makes an egg to burst open with life.
God is great
He selects all the love-songs for every bird to sing
He makes broken bones mend
He gives every flower its specific perfume
He cares for seeds and they turn to fruit.
God is awesome
He tells the seasons when to change
He gives us air so we can breathe
He feeds multitudes of living organisms on our planet
He waters fields of green carpets with morning dew.
Every leaf is a marvel of God's genius
Every baby is filled with God's love
There is nothing in this world more precious
than the beautiful kindness of God.
© Bernard Levine
Not Bad for your first one, better then I could ever do. And yes, God truely loves us. Voted up.
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voice of one,
Thanks, I am NO poet, but sometimes, words just kind of come out....this time it worked....sometimes WOW, not even close...lol.
I appreciate your supportive comments.
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