What site should I visit so that I can publish my work and leave a comment for it?

I made a composition. It is a story and I want to see if it'll click to the mass once they read it. I'm looking for a person who can help me to improve more and give comments to my work. I hope someone help me. I want to print it also as my first work of art in story writing.

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Thinspread says

7 years ago
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