I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Phantom Clowns

  1. T T Wright profile image54
    T T Wrightposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Phantom Clowns. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. colorfulone profile image87
    colorfuloneposted 16 months ago

    Grammar, spelling, punctuation, and spaces between paragraphs just to name a few problems.

    Is English not your first language?