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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Society : Challenges, Issues, Perspectives

  1. Kritee Mahanti profile image79
    Kritee Mahantiposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Society : Challenges, Issues, Perspectives (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. psycheskinner profile image81
    psycheskinnerposted 14 months ago

    For a start you should put a space after every comma and every full stop.

    Then think: is this just something I want to say, or is there an audience who will be helped by reading it?

  3. loche profile image75
    locheposted 14 months ago

    HI Kritee,
    There are quite a  few grammatical/ punctuation mistakes in your hub. Please proofread the text prior to publishing.

  4. peeples profile image90
    peeplesposted 14 months ago

    To add to what has already been said, your article is not broken up into multiple headers, your pictures are not sourced, not one picture is full width, and your article is a bit short. When in edit mode you can look at the top right side and you will see some suggestions of how to make it better. More than 700 words, with tables, maps, or polls, and 3 attributed photos.