I'd like feedback on my article:

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  1. winah profile image60
    winahposted 6 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article "How can you keep your self motivated or How can you keep your self out of stress" (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. DrMark1961 profile image100
    DrMark1961posted 6 years ago

    What is your motivation for writing here on HP?

    1. winah profile image60
      winahposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Well... I want to utilize my skills of writing and I could only find HP for that purpose  where I am even able to ask native writers about what should I improve or else.

      1. theraggededge profile image87
        theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Winah, we can't teach you English. All we can do is give you tips to improve your articles... and the first tip is to improve your English Language. There are many resources on the web to help you with it.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image81
    FatFreddysCatposted 6 years ago

    To get this article published, your English writing ability would have to improve on a massive scale.

    1. winah profile image60
      winahposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Yes,you are absolutely right I really need to improve my English but would you please rate my article on topic as well It will be helpful for me to improve my topics as well.

      1. twitchtools profile image37
        twitchtoolsposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        It just 404's for me.

  4. winah profile image60
    winahposted 6 years ago

    theraggededge yes I am working on that and will definitely do more BTW thank you.

     
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