I'd like feedback on my Hub: Living in Harlingen, Texas

  1. Canita Pro profile image84
    Canita Proposted 15 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Living in Harlingen, Texas. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Molly Layton profile image92
      Molly Laytonposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      First of all, I would run over the hub with a grammar editor. There are many mistakes that can be fixed with just an editor.

      One of the questions I have is, "Is this about living in Harlingen, Texas or visiting there?" Your Hub appears to be about visiting the town, which makes the title a little confusing.

    2. Kylyssa profile image95
      Kylyssaposted 15 months ago in reply to this

      Try reading your hub aloud or try getting someone else to read your hub to you so you can hear how your sentences sound. The phrasing is awkward and stilted; try writing more like you speak and your writing will be more appealing and easier to understand.

 
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