I'd like feedback on my Hub: Program Your Subconscious Mind to Achieve Goals and

  1. Immense Myriad profile image60
    Immense Myriadposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Program Your Subconscious Mind to Achieve Goals and to Change Your Mental State (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      I can see a few problems with your hub.

      1. Read it out loud. Notice how many times you wrote 'something' in a very brief article.
      2. It's too short. A subject such as subconscious programming deserves a lot more effort.
      3. You've bunched up a heap of images at the bottom. Choose two and put one at the top and one in the middle.
      4. You haven't credited the images. Are they copyright-free Public Domain? Are they CC licensed. Who created them? https://hubpageshelp.com/media/Learning … -image-use
      5. Your title is too long.
      6. You are relying on YouTube videos to provide the content - a video should enhance it, not replace actual words - written by you.
      7. Why have you written the sub-heading in quotes?

      Address those problems and your hub will probably be approved.

      Have a look at the Learning Center: https://hubpageshelp.com/

      Hope that helps.

      1. Immense Myriad profile image60
        Immense Myriadposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks so much for the feedback smile

 
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