I'd like feedback on my Hub: Introducing The Pot (Dwaa Mbwara)

  1. adigaproductions profile image69
    adigaproductionsposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Introducing The Pot (Dwaa Mbwara) (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Sorry that you are having trouble getting your hub featured. The problem is your English. It's not really up to the standard required for Hubpages.

      The hub is very interesting so is there any way you could have someone fluent in English to go through it and make the necessary corrections?

  2. RonElFran profile image96
    RonElFranposted 4 weeks ago

    The issue I see is that the hub never tells readers who the Bachama or Bwatiye are. So a reader can't put the interesting info about the pot into any context. Can you give some background so that readers who don't know about your culture can relate?