I'd like feedback on my article: Tourist attractions in Afghanistan, Bamyan

  1. Baktash profile image60
    Baktashposted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Tourist attractions in Afghanistan, Bamyan (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve?
    Thanks!

  2. pen promulgates profile image81
    pen promulgatesposted 12 days ago

    Hi Baktash

    Welcome to Hubpages.

    Images are one of the issues. If you click on source, it directs to the websites. Images must be legal to use. You must  take the permission and cite the sources, not link them externally. You may face penalty for the misuse of images.

    Remove the rating capsule. You can add a poll instead.

    Keep the title in 'Title Case' - capitalize 'Attractions' too. 'in' can remain as it is.

    The attractions described have more emphasis on destruction/damage caused by the former ruling authorities than possessing it's own beauty or significance.

    Otherwise, it's a lovely article. You have extensive knowledge. Thumps-up for that. 

    Hope these help.

    1. Baktash profile image60
      Baktashposted 12 days ago in reply to this

      thank you very much for your feedback I'll consider the points you mentioned

 
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