I'd like feedback on my article: Poetry and the Power of Words

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  1. safiaasif341 profile image46
    safiaasif341posted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Poetry and the Power of Words (must be signed in to view)

    1. GwennyOh profile image92
      GwennyOhposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Well at least you tried. It's frustrating to read because it's worded so awkwardly. Really, you need to learn English to write fluidly.

  2. theraggededge profile image99
    theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi there,

    You have placed your article in the SciFi/Fantasy category. It should be in Creative Writing

    Your bio is self-promotional. It isn't grammatically correct and has punctuation issues.

    The text is somewhat garbled and not easy to understand. There are many grammatical errors and strange sentence structures. Have you used spinning software?

    It's important to know that, when writing about literature, your own writing must be perfect. If it isn't, you lose credibility.

    There's no structure to the article. It should be broken down into sections with subheadings.

    There is a lot of information in the Learning Center, click Help, top right.

    I just pasted a portion of the text into Google and a weird site came up. I can't access it but here's what I saw. If you published elsewhere and have removed the original, there's no problem. However, if you have copied the writing, it's plagiarism (stealing).

    https://hubstatic.com/15308799_f1024.jpg

  3. theraggededge profile image99
    theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago

    I took a quick look at your other article and there is definitely reason to think that you have used spinning or translation software to generate the text:

    "It is accepted that when the tests are close, you need to consume the 12 PM oil. Study season of every understudy is unique, some are evening people while the others are morning winged animals."

    Not good roll

  4. FatFreddysCat profile image97
    FatFreddysCatposted 4 weeks ago

    From the OP's bio



    Yeeeeeah, OK. Serve me up one of them there "articals" about SHOOPING, buddy.

    Pfffft.

  5. Ekcedeon profile image90
    Ekcedeonposted 4 weeks ago

    I'd suggest you read the article out loud.

 
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