I'd like feedback on my article: Poetry and the Power of Words
Hi there,
You have placed your article in the SciFi/Fantasy category. It should be in Creative Writing
Your bio is self-promotional. It isn't grammatically correct and has punctuation issues.
The text is somewhat garbled and not easy to understand. There are many grammatical errors and strange sentence structures. Have you used spinning software?
It's important to know that, when writing about literature, your own writing must be perfect. If it isn't, you lose credibility.
There's no structure to the article. It should be broken down into sections with subheadings.
There is a lot of information in the Learning Center, click Help, top right.
I just pasted a portion of the text into Google and a weird site came up. I can't access it but here's what I saw. If you published elsewhere and have removed the original, there's no problem. However, if you have copied the writing, it's plagiarism (stealing).
I took a quick look at your other article and there is definitely reason to think that you have used spinning or translation software to generate the text:
"It is accepted that when the tests are close, you need to consume the 12 PM oil. Study season of every understudy is unique, some are evening people while the others are morning winged animals."
Not good
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