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critiques need for my poems.

  1. saleheensblog profile image60
    saleheensblogposted 6 years ago

    I am ridiculously poor in English and never tried to write a poem in English prior to join hubpages. Now I am very interested to know about my writing ability. What do you think? What I have written is anything worth to be called poem or they are just rubbish? Please let me know. Will I carry on or I just have irritated enough and need to stop this nonsense right now? Here are some of the links.
    http://hubpages.com/hub/My-Old-Piano-A-Poem
    http://hubpages.com/hub/Angel-A-Poem
    http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Lonely-Child-A-poem
    http://hubpages.com/hub/Never-Leave-Me-Alone-A-Poem

    sorry for the misspelled title. #
    # critiques needed for my poems.

  2. saleheensblog profile image60
    saleheensblogposted 6 years ago

    If I have asked for to many poems to be critiqued please do it at least for a couple.

  3. saleheensblog profile image60
    saleheensblogposted 6 years ago

    no one???????

  4. Cheeky Girl profile image88
    Cheeky Girlposted 6 years ago

    Hy - I have checked out your "Piano" hub and left some comments. I will check out more hubs and poetry of your too. You are a good poet.

 
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