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Looking for some body to review my first hub page article

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    TheNovaposted 5 years ago

    I would just like your feedback, critisicm and notes on it, Thank you here is the link:

    http://hubpages.com/hub/The-truth-about-Girl-Gamers

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image83
    Uninvited Writerposted 5 years ago

    Not a bad start, you should try and make it a little longer. I would also cloak the links though. The affiliate link makes it look unprofessional.

  3. smalika profile image60
    smalikaposted 5 years ago

    Try and incorporate more content; an article ideally should not be less than 600 to 800 words. Interesting topic by the way.

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    TheNovaposted 5 years ago

    Thank you for the replies I will incorporate these

 
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