I am New What Do You Think

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   CuzzoShizzoposted 14 years ago

   Hello, I am new to creating Hubpages, but decided to give it a try to see how it works out for me. I want to find out from other Hubbers if my Hubs are fine the way that they are or if they need some work to be able to make it. If you would please review my first 3 Hubs and give me some feedback I would greatly appreciate it. Here are the links:
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Inexpensive-Laptop
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Survivor-Heroes-vs-Villains
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Baby-Diaper-Bags-
   
   I would like to know if the layout if good as well as the content. If there is anything that needs improvement please let me know, and please do not be afraid to be too critical. Thank you in advance.

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   Chef Macposted 14 years ago

   I think it looks pretty good Cuzzo. You might break up the long text in the middle, but I'd say it look pretty sharp

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      CuzzoShizzoposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Chef Mac, I will go in and add a picture to break up some of the longer content. I appreciate your feedback.

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   Faybe Bayposted 14 years ago

   Looks good, I would check some content to see if it is written twice in the same paragraph. You don't want to come off as a word count writer. But, if you want a pat on the back I have one for you, three hubs on the first go:) Great work. Join in the thirty hubs in thirty days challenge! Lots of smiles to you and welcome to hubPages. Guts too, opening a forum about it, watch out for bullies, don't let them scare you.

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      CuzzoShizzoposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your input. I will go back and look at the content to make sure that it is not too repetitive. Thank you for the pat on the back. I will consider joining the thirty hubs in thirty days challenge once I have more time to devote to it. Thank you for the heads up on bullies I know they are everywhere on the internet and will try to put you down any way possible. I appreciate your valuable feedback

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   pinkyleeposted 14 years ago

   i think your hubs are great. as stated previously you might want to break up the texts.. ad videos or pictures and defiantly watch out for repetitiveness. i think you are doing wonderful .. it wasnt til my 3rd day that i posted my first hub lol .. im up to 7 now as i found it was fun and interesting at the same time.
   
   there are bullies however everyone here is amazing in one way or another though some are hard to read but sstill amazing people as they all help with anything you need..
   
   happy hubbing and awesome start

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      CuzzoShizzoposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the advice. I will go in and try to break up the content so that it is easy to read through. I was a little bit worried about that and now that 2 people have said it my worries have been confirmed.
      
      I will be refreshing the content and adding some pictures and videos so that my Hubs will look better. Thank you for your valuable input and compliments.

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         pinkyleeposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         you are more than welcome

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