Basking in the Dark

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Basking in the Light



Let me not bask in the light

Of our artificial sun

That keeps me awake each night

Makes my face looks wan



Please turn if off

So you can’t see my troubled thought

I don’t want to show proof

That I am distraught



All I need is a full rest

So this tired palaver

Can at least make a protest

When the day is over



All I want is a breathing space

From hitherto and tomorrow,

All I desire is to get an ace

When the day starts anew



So I can once again wear a mask

For the night covers it well

Nobody dares to ask

When the darkness tolls its bell



Can’t you see?

That behind this façade

Is a phantom, so ugly

Forlorn, so sad…











Darkness to light

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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

Raci you should do this tpe of poetry more.. you're so good at it.. voted Damn Good! and up..:)


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello Frank...lol...i'm in my dark mood when i write this...yeah...if all moods are like this...then i should be glad to...thank you...


عم المساتر 4 years ago

i feel it very nice poem


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

I love the deep emotions raging outward of this masked character in your poem, its quite unique, I love the flow of it and how it rhymes, it has a mind of its own this poem of your Raci. Nice job!

Voted up and getting shared onto my new profile on Facebook, with my followers, and all of my networks.

I had to do it, I had to separate my private and personal FB profile from my professional one recently, and once again thanks for the friend acceptance up there in FB land. This is a sensational writing technique of your poetry, oh yes indeed.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thanks ?? ??????? for visiting and leaving a wonderful comment...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you Mike for appreciating...and leaving a very thorough comment...yes, i am one with my poem if my feeling gets a better hold of me...it's like water, being trapped in a container yet find its way to be unleashed...


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

Great poem. I'm reading it to be about hiding one's true face from others and the mask we sometimes need to wear. Very good writing.


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

gr8 work...voted up.


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ChristyWrites 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

Such a sad yet powerful poem..


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Very sad and yet touches the soul of a person. Everybody can feel this poem because everybody wears a mask once or even all their life. Thanks for sharing raciniwa. voted up.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thanks Cyndi...i really don't know why we need to hide our pain from others though our eyes speak volumes about it...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you dghbrh...take care always...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

yes Christy, sometimes it helps me to overcome sadness when i express it...thank for visiting...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello ignugent...yes, at times we can't help but hide behind this mask to keep us safe, or to protect us from further pain...thanks for the wonderful comment...


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time2rite 4 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

Beautifully written, Raciniwa! I felt as if you had looked into my heart and written from my soul...awesome write!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you time2rite...maybe we share the same sentiments...take care too...have a great day!!!


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

My friend, first let me thank you for favoring me with so many left comments to my work, I am ashamed for not replying quickly. I have been moving and my Net has been down for almost a week. I am back now and inspired to take my quill in hand and scribe my thoughts, my Muse has been so impatient while I was busy with my move. raciniwa this is a beautiful heart felt piece you left here. You to write from your soul, you found mine and left your mark with your comments. I am indebted to you sweet poet, keep writing you are brilliant, your light shines into my darkness, a candle blowing in the wind, your breath leaves me inspired. Hugs


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

An awesome piece of poetry, voted up


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

An awesome piece of poetry, voted up


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

Vincent...i am always in awe with the way you write, and have been an inspiration for my dark moments...you're an Edgar Allan Poe of the modern times, moreover William Faulkner...and it is an honor to read your masterpiece...

thank you for gracing my hub...bless you...


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epigramman 4 years ago

such a lovely writer you - I always leave with a positive glow and it remains with me when you come and visit me ...... sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time 9:29pm


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you girishpuri for visiting...have a great day!!!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you Colin for regarding me as such, and i am basking in that glow too...have a pleasant evening...


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Pollyannalana 4 years ago from US

A really great write raciniwa! Voting up.


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ahorseback 4 years ago

Raciniwa , I hate the though of such a beautiful smile as yours with a mask over it , or beneath it either . You write very well, and I ,much like Vincent am sorry for not coming here more often , forgive me . And smile a little smile for me , your friend Ed.........heres one for you :-}


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

Fun to read one of yours, too. Thanks.


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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

Passionate scribe; leaving one to ponder the various contrast comparison of light and dark that you bring to us.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello Pollyannalana...thank you for the vote of confidence...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you Demas...have a great day!!!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello QudsiaP1...thank you for visiting and leaving an insightful comment...take care...Cheers!


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

beautiful thoughts expressed vividly.

voted up and sharing it across :)


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

Hello Ruchira!!!it's so nice to see you here and read your wonderful comment...thank you for visiting...take care always!!!


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DFiduccia 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Raci,

This poem drew me in and held me, but I left feeling sad. I hope this is not an introspection of you, because from your writings and your profile picture, you are never less than lovely.

…voted up—DF


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Raciniwa

The emotions and images you provoke in your poetry speaks to our hearts.

It is hard having to mask the way that we are really feeling.

Voted up and away.

Take care :)


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

Hello DFiduccia...thank you so much for the uplifting words...i can't deny that there are times that i will allow myself to succumb to that darkness, but once i am in it, i still find time to reflect on my thoughts that eventually will lead me out from it...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

Sueswan...thank you for visiting...yes, it is really difficult to mask true emotions and feelings especially you need to inspire others...my students are looking up at me and draw from strength...take care too...have a pleasant day!


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

raci, you're soo good! i love it!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you snowdrops...


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pennyofheaven 4 years ago from New Zealand

Very deep, very visual. Awesomely done.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello penny...thank you for visiting and inspiration...have a great day!!!


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Awesome poem Raci. I think we all wear a mask at some point in our lives and you have captured this perfectly


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Laurinzo Scott 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

Beautiful poem racinwa... simple and yet so profound...WOW!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

hello Rosemay...glad to see you...thank you for visiting and sharing my sentiments...have a great day...take care always...


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you Laurinzo for visiting...have a great day...


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

Excellent writing. You took time to create a beautiful rhyming that came to us like confessions of a soul that kept itself in the dark.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

a confession indeed mighty lord...thank you for gracing my hub today...


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Beautiful work here from the heart! Up!


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

Hello xstatic...thank you for gracing my hub page today...have a pleasant evening...


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

I feel the soul of mother nature here... I sense a lament of a pained heart...

This piece is heavily symbolic and contains beautiful metaphors...

Awesome writing ..


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank Rahul for the in depth comment...and yes, when my heart bleeds...so does my suffers...have a great day...


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ahorseback 4 years ago

Raci , you are never alone , we sit beside you , arms around you and your beautiful shoulders that connect to awesome and beautiful hands , that write awesome and beautiful words like these !


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you for that assurance ahorseback...yes, i always believe that somehow there is always someone who can guide me when i tread upon the dark...have a great day...

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