Changing My Thoughts

Setting Them Free

If we could hold all our thoughts in one room

What would we have ?

I place where all our emotions hide

From the very first one to the last one

They could dance together in beauty or they can fight until only the strongest survive

We could see each emotion  for what they really are 

Beauty and the beast together in one room

We can live our lives and never take notice of all the talent we have

To master each feeling and understand its significance

How we can help people through the words that we have learned how to communicate to each other ?

Some are effective and helpful while others are poor and degrading and should be cast away into the ocean

Will the day ever come where mankind tries to correct its wicked ways ?

Will good finally triumph over evil ?

If it did then would we have peace in the world ?

Where the purest and most beautiful thoughts can be shared and admired forever

Comments 11 comments

Toby Hansen 5 years ago

A great piece. Voted up.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Too often we forget what we say and live our life the way we want.Not truely understanding the meaning behind our words.Thanks so much.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

That was beautiful. Wold peace would be an amazing thing, ye it shouldn´t be so difficult. Thank you for this


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

A really beautiful poem and thank you so much for sharing.

Take care.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick I think if we ever did find WORLD PEACE then the world would fight over who made it happen.So maybe it is the struggle to find a better feeling than we are feeling now and in the search to be happy with that.This way we never really are satisfied and too busy trying to be happier to fight.Eiddwen I am glad I could share it with others who understand my feelings.Most people are happy being mad at the world.So I leave them alone.I have to enjoy my day my way.Thats sending a little cheer in the air.Wherever it lands BEWARE!!!


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

good point. Too busy chasing our own happiness to fight. Remiinds of a joke in the 60s where a guy was so laid back (due to wacky backy). His friend come on there´a war .!we´re needed.

Answer. Start without me , man.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick The 60's was known for change.If we only listened.Follow the sun and we will rise and set every day.Thanks.


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Darlene Sabella 5 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

Maybe to start at one thought at a time, to fix it and bring it into focus so we can gain knowledge on why we carry that thought. Let's break it down, let's find the hiding places in that room and cast out the thoughts that should be viewed in a different light. Sometimes we grow but our thoughts stay hidden, it creares dark corners and it needs the light in order to be fixed. rate this hub up, your friend and fan, love & peace dasrki


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Darlene Sabella You said it better than me.Are you sure this isn't your hub and I borrowed it from you.I want to hear more.Please share.E-Mail anytime.


BIKTMIA 5 years ago

Due to health related I could not figure posts but , over time thanks for the insites of the learning experience with additional healing for the strive reality is always different.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

BIKTMIA The HubPages is filled with so many friends. I am so happy to share and learn all about life through each one you.That makes my day better than I could of ever expected.Thank you for reading and I hope you are on your way to a quick recovery.

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