Did I Say I Took Kids To Park (limerick)

I took kids to park every day

And there in the sun we would play

We’d let dreams unfurl

And let fancies twirl

Until the cute girl went away


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

But Daddy, I don't want to leave the park now! Ha ha ha... too funny!


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

If ever there was an incentive, that is it. :)


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faythef 3 years ago from USA

LOL..didn't expect that last line....too cute.


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Darrylmdavis 3 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

Thanks for the much-needed laugh :-)


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

I think I have heard this somewhere before - grrrrrr.


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Jools99 3 years ago from North-East UK

What? You mean you weren't giving you kids 100% attention :o)


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Great one. You are so good at this.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

Now the kids you were with were they your brother's children that you were watching? wink wink....:)


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

You are definitely the "gift" that keeps on giving. Voted up and funny.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Funny one..I won't tell!!!!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Flirt!


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Ack. Now this I will keep a secret! Thanks Hatter!


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

ohhhh the last line is was quite a twist as always....You are fantastic then never before. Shared and voted up.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Oh how I loved this one Martin and vote a huge' up up and away!'"!!

Eddy.


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Theater girl 3 years ago from New Jersey

So very funny!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

she is most definitely a cutie pie! too bad..lol


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

So humorous and oh so true...any kid will do ;) Loved it!

Voted up, funny, and awesome.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

At least you're honest!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

This was delightful. Some men!


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Insightful Tiger 3 years ago

Ahhh and she's gone... Let's go! hee hee


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

They say that into every life, some rain must fall.

Maybe cute girl will return and be willing to 'play ball.'

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