Eyes Are The Mirror To The Soul Poem

This is me and this poem is about how 

my eyes see through to Eric's soul.

I appreciate all comments.

Eyes Are The Mirror To The Soul Poem

 

  • Eyes are the mirror to the soul.. When she looks at him she just melts in his eyes. He looks at her as though it were the first time.The first time was a time she will never forget. She will never forget the first time their eyes met.
  • She had never felt a feeling like this before. She knew she had found her soul mate. He looked at her and undressed her with his eyes. She could feel his glare through to her soul. She blushed as he continued to look at her. She felt naked as she stood before him. She was flattered by his smile.
  • He had the most beautiful eyes she had ever seen. She thought she were going to faint. Her knees grew weaker and weaker as she stood looking at him. She could have looked at him for eternity. The silence broke between them when he spoke. He spoke her name as they were introduced by a friend. Her name never sounded more beautiful when spoken.
  • She can't recall how long she stood before she spoke. It was as if forever. She was like a giddy teenager who had their very first crush. Her words trembled as she spoke to him. She could not get her composure. She noticed she was trembling. Had she just lost it in his presence. A feeling like this, she had never felt in her lifetime. She was in love at first sight. The first sight of him. A sight of perfection.
  • She couldn't believe such a man existed. He was absolutely perfect to her. The most perfect man she ever feasted her eyes upon. He was tall and oh so handsome. He grasp her hand into his. His large massive hand covered her tiny trembling fingers. She suddenly became very hot. Her whole body was on fire. Suddenly she almost lost her balance. If she lost her balance would she land in his arms? In his arms thats where she would like to be.
  • She desperately would love to be in his arms. How would it feel to be in his arms? She could only imagine that feeling. She imagined it would be Heavenly. This she knew would be ultimate feeling of pleasure. Pleasure which she had never known.
  • They exchanged phone numbers between them. A long time would pass between them before they would meet again. She would often dream of him and wait by the phone. Many months would pass, still no calls between them. She never gave up hope that she would see him again. After all he was to be her soul mate. He was also waiting to call her. Not to seem desperate she never dialed his number. If he were to be her soul mate their paths would cross again someday. Instead neither one gave into their desires. They waited on the other one.
  • The day would come when she would see him again. He was out in town running a few last minute errands. She was as well. The two of them met and embraced each other. When she looked at him she could see the reflection of her own soul. When she looked at him, he knew she loved him. He could see his soul through her eyes. They were in love and they both knew it.
  • When they met a lot of time had passed between them. For them it was like the first time. He had never forgotten her nor did she ever forget him. How could she he was to be with her forever. She had longed for him. He had wished for her. She wanted him to scoop her up and whisk her away. To whisk her away and make passionate love to her.
  • At last he did. They only spoke with their eyes. There was no need to speak. Eyes the mirror to their souls. BY Rhonda G. Waits 12/6/10

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Lynn Adams 6 years ago

A beautiful poem I loved it


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etna5678 6 years ago from Lahore, Pakistan

You have a vivid imagination and a mastery of passion!!! Thumbs up Rhonda!


Eric Musch 6 years ago

Wow this is beautiful


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Ann-Carole 6 years ago

Lovely


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QudsiaP1 6 years ago

Lovely indeed.


anonymous 6 years ago

So beautiful.


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Rhonda Waits 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you everyone for your thoughtful comments. They mean so much to me.


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A.A. Zavala 6 years ago from Texas

Beautiful story, thanks for sharing.


anonymous 5 years ago

Beautiful article.


anonymous 5 years ago

Wow what a great poem.


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ladyjojo 5 years ago

hewww!! what can i say you have said it all in your hub, lol :) keep up the work


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you ladyjojo for your comment. I always write from the heart. Your comment means alot to me. Thanks again.


Joy Dans 5 years ago

Wow. This is beautiful your a great writer,


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you Joy Dans for your comment. Thank you for the compliment. It means a lot to me.


Elizabeth Jernigan 5 years ago

I loved your poem.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you Elizabeth I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Your comment means so much to me.


Eric JM 5 years ago

I loved this poem. I feel like it was writen for me.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank Eric JM for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.


Gail Minor 5 years ago

Loved your poem beautiful.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you Gail for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you QudsiaP1 for your comment. Thanks for stopping by I appreciate your comment.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you QudsiaP1 for your comment. Thanks for stopping by I appreciate your comment.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Ann-Carole Thanks for your comment. Thanks for stopping by my hubs.


Lyn Marshall 5 years ago

Wow. This is beautiful. I wish I had your talent. Voted up.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Lyn for your comment. I write from my heart. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment and compliment. That was a very sweet thing to say.


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ahorseback 5 years ago

If a man or a woman gets to experience this just once in thier life . They are extremely lucky. All too often only one gets the benifit of total and complete love. Or for one ,it retreats to some unknown place. But, it is the most soul wrenching experience for sure. And those who never do...? I feel bad for.Great piece of writing .


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ahorseback 5 years ago

If a man or a woman gets to experience this just once in thier life . They are extremely lucky. All too often only one gets the benifit of total and complete love. Or for one ,it retreats to some unknown place. But, it is the most soul wrenching experience for sure. And those who never do...? I feel bad for.Great piece of writing .


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks ahorseback for your comment. You always have such beautiful comments. You are right to experience total and complete love, is awesome. Thanks for stopping by my hubs. Thanks for the compliment.


Lindsey Golden 5 years ago

Lovely just lovely.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks for your comment Lindsey. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to stop by. Blessings to and your family.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago

You left nothing out.I felt I was there.Wonderful from beginning to end.Now thats Love.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you DREAM ON for your comment. This was written about Eric we are engaged to be married. He is my inspiration. Thanks for stopping. You are always welcome here.


Edna Lynard 5 years ago

You write with such passion. I enjoy your work.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Edna for your comment and delightful compliment. When I write I write from my heart. Thanks for stopping by my hubs.


Rachel Adams 5 years ago

I loved this poem. It is the most beautiful poem ever.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Rachel for your beautiful comment. I am so glad that you loved my poem. Thanks for enjoying it. Have a blessed day.


Linda Franks 5 years ago

Most beautiful poem Rhonda. You are so gifted in writing.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Linda for that comment. It touches the depths of my soul. Please stop by again. You are always welcome here.


June More 5 years ago

Rhonda you are a beautiful writer. I am in awe of you. Thanks your poem was lovely.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks June for your comment. I appreciate your compliment you are so kind. Thanks for enjoying my poem.


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IN2Deep 5 years ago

This is some Awesome writing you did here! So much Love and Passion and wrapped up into your words...


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks IN2Deep for your beautiful comment and compliment. You inspire me too write more. Bless you.


Roy Edmonds 5 years ago

Just beautiful. The poem is too. Thanks


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota

You had me absolutely captivated. Oh how I longed for the two of you to meet again. Loved how you ended it. The rest can be up to the reader. Just wondering, is this fiction?????? or is it your fiance????? Hee Hee


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Minnetonka Twin for your beautiful comment. No the poem is real, it is about my fiance Eric. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for leaving such a beautiful and captivating comment and compliment.


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ahorseback 5 years ago

Beautiful, I would wish that everyone feel this at least once in a lifetime. And wouldn't it be great if we were born to find just that one! Instead we waste half of our life sometimes on the wrong "investment", we are among the lucky ones. Beautiful writing.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks ahorseback for your beautiful comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes it is great to find the right one. Some search their whole life for that special one. I wrote this poem about Eric and I. He is that special someone. You are a special friend,thanks nice to see you again.


EricJM 5 years ago

You write so beautifully. This is a very beautiful poem and I enjoyed it. You are a beautiful girl beautiful pic.


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

Rhonda, a beautiful, passoniate, love poem. How lucky you are to feel that depth of passion.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks EricJM for your beautiful comment and compliment. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day. Please feel free to visit again.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks KoffeeKlatch Gals for your beautiful comment and compliment. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you,I guess I am a lucky girl. I feel lucky with him. Thanks for dropping by again. Have a wonderful day.


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James A Watkins 5 years ago from Chicago

Wow! This is beautiful writing. I enjoyed your words very much. There is nothing like true love. Thank you for this treasure.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks James for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes that is true,true love is wonderful. Thank you for leaving a lovely comment and compliment.

Have a nice day.


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Jhangora 5 years ago from Dehradun

Beautiful Poem. Would be great if you could format it better.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Jhangora for your comment. I am going to do that one day,real soon. I have been really busy,trying to finish my first novel. Your comment is appreciated.

Have a great day.


SHARMILA 5 years ago

REALLY I LIKE UR POAM


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thank you SHARMILA for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a great day.


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katiem2 5 years ago from I'm outta here

What a great poem I so related to every word. :) Katie


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Katie thanks for your delightful comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for dropping by your comment is always appreciated.


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Wayne's Word 5 years ago

Amazing how words can evoke such feelings. This was really great Rhonda.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Wayne thanks for your comment I appreciated it very much. Yes,you are right words can evoke such feelings.

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you


wolfpape 5 years ago

One of the most romantic poems I have ever resd!


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks wolfpape fro your comment and compliment. I so appreciate it. You are truly very sweet.

Have a nice day


first love pom 5 years ago

very nice poem .this is one of my fvt poem.i read this poem many times.very romantic and i love to read romanic poems


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks first love pom for your beautiful comment. I am so glad you like it. I always write from my heart I hope that it shows. Thanks for dropping by today.


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a1flowers 5 years ago from Mumbai

You seems to be from heaven... thanks for such a nice poem.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks a1flowers for your beautiful comment and I am humbled. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. I wish you a great life.


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Raitu Disong 3 years ago

Wow this a beautiful beautiful poem!

LOVE so sweet:)


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Rhonda Waits 3 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hello Raitu I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes Love is sweet..

Thanks for dropping by my hubs..:)

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