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My Perfection Poem By Rhonda Waits

Updated on July 31, 2015

My Perfection. His gentle lips caress her trembling body. He loves her like no other man ever has, or ever will. No man will ever make her feel like this and she feels as though she is the only woman alive. No one else can catch his eye like her. She is his perfection, his beauty, and his soul.

His heart only beats for her and she only lives for him. Without him she would only breathe until she takes her last breath. She was born to be with him. He was made for her. They love each other like there is non- other. They belong to one another now and always.

He gently unclothes her and looks at her naked body. He picks her up and lays her across the bed. She lies in front of him with wide open eyes. Is he going to make love to her now? She does not know, she can only dream of him now. He is studying her as though he had never seen her naked before.

She wonders what is he thinking? What is he going to do with her? Is he going to ravish her? She is puzzled by his glare. He has never looked at her like this. Suddenly he speaks." I want to paint you my beauty! I want to capture your unchanged spirit. I want to capture your glory! I want to capture your soul! I want to put your beauty on canvas!"

He wants to paint her. She doesn't know how to respond. She has never been painted before. She does not know what to do. Will she upset him if she refuses? She gives in and says alright I will try. She wishes to please him. She will do whatever it takes. She wishes it was darker, then he wouldn't see her flaws. He says she is perfect. She is the most beautiful woman he has ever known. He makes her feel beautiful. Suddenly she is under his spell once more.

She would have done anything for him. He ask her to make noises like a wild cat and start pawing at the air. She doesn't know how to do this. What if she looks silly or if she does it wrong. Should she ask him how to do this? He is the only man she never wants to lose.or disappoint. Will you please show me how? She ask. He says" don't be afraid to try new things and do different things" It is only you and I no one else will ever know.

She thanks him, with a smile. She feels safe with him. He will take care of her. She is no longer afraid she is like putty in his hands. He will mold her into this image he is trying to capture. He lays her on a bear skin rug. She feels like she has transformed into the jungle. With the wild animals and all of the different sounds of the earth around her, where did he get this music these sounds? It was all so surreal now. She had time warped into the jungle.

She felt as though she was the queen of the jungle and he was her King. King of the jungle the great lion. King of all beast, she began growling making noises, she sounded like a big jungle cat. He began making noises also. They both become so aroused that they indulge in their fantasies. Afterwards he begins to capture her beauty on canvas. "You are my perfection he says. I will love you forever".

By Rhonda G. Waits 12/21/2010

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    celeBritys4africA Thanks for your comment. I am glad you truly enjoyed my poem.

    Have a great day

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    celeBritys4africA 6 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

    Rated 5 stars, voted up.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks AskAshlie for your beautiful comment and compliment. Thanks so much for drop pinging in, you are welcome here anytime. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

    Have a wonderful day

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    AskAshlie3433 6 years ago from WEST VIRGINIA

    You are a real great writer. Have some talent there. It was beautiful. Take care.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Denise for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed my tribute to Eric. As you can see most of everything here is about Eric, so yes I feel lucky as well as Eric.

    Thanks for dropping by my hubs.

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    Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

    What a beautiful tribute to a lucky guy. Lovely.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks apprentice for your beautiful comment. I appreciate your feed back on my poem. If you ever need anything just drop me a line. Have a great day.

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    The Apprentice 6 years ago from Philippines

    Such a great love Rhonda..That was so sweet. Thanks for the warm welcome.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks EricJM for a great comment. Yes this is a very moving poem with passion. I am glad you enjoyed it. I am considering a book on this one. Thanks your comment humbles me.

    Have a terrific day

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    EricJM 6 years ago

    Whoa this a moving poem. Such passion. You have a rare talent. I hope you consider writing this poem and others always. This would make a great book.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Hi again. Helpful Hanna thanks for your beautiful compliment and comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Always, thanks for stopping by my hubs.

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    Helpful Hanna 6 years ago

    Very well written and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Azlynn for your most beautiful comment. I am so happy for you. I am happy for the both of us. Yes it is so exciting when two hearts meet as one.

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    Azlynn 6 years ago from Gisborne, New Zealand

    Very beautiful. I have found love like this also. Although mine is with a her and not a him. Its amazing and so special when two hearts unite in a love unexpected.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Doug for your comment. Thanks for stopping by my hubs. Yes it is primal.

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    Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

    Whoa, heavy stuff here. Primal.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Samantha Simpson for your comment. Thanks for the beautiful compliment.

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    Samantha Simpson 6 years ago

    Gorgeous Rhonda thanks for sharing your poem. This is just so beautiful.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Mentalist for your comment. Yes there is intimate detail in my poems. They are true and I try to write from my heart. Writing is a way for me to express myself.

    Thanks so much for understanding my poems.

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    Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    Beautifuly intimate detail...refreshing Rhonda!;)

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Edoka Writes for your delightful comment. Thanks for stopping by my hubs. Come back anytime, you are always welcome here.

    Happy New Year

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    Edoka Writes 6 years ago

    Gorgeous! Thank you for sharing your talent.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks June for your comment. I am glad you thought it was beautiful. I enjoyed writing it. I wish the whole world could see my poem. That would be and ultimate high.

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    June More 6 years ago

    Such beautiful words. So well written and poetic. Thanks for sharing your poem with the world.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Linda Franks for your beautiful comment. Please stop back by anytime. Have a great New Year.

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    Linda Franks 6 years ago

    I truly enjoy your poems you have such talent. Never change the way you write. Beautiful.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate your beautiful compliment. Thanks and have a Happy New Year.

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    Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

    Earlier today, I wondered if to speak of such passions would be acceptable on Hubpages...after reading yours, fanning the flames of my romantic heart...I doth believe I can. LOL Thank you...very, very beautiful.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks LSpel for your comment. I am glad you liked it. It is about Eric and I. Thanks for stopping by. I wish you and your husband a great New Year.

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    Lydia McCarter 6 years ago from The Murder Mitten

    Very beautiful Rhonda! I love it.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks stars439 for your delightful comment. Thanks a have Blessed, wonderful, and great New Year.

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    stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

    Great work. Really nice writing. Happy New Year.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Truckstop Sally for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. Have a Happy New Year.

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    Truckstop Sally 6 years ago

    Powerful! Sensual! Great work!

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Wayne for your comment. I guess it is like and adult version of the Lion King. I am glad you enjoyed it WB. Thank you my friend. Have a Fantastic New Year.

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    Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

    Wow Rhonda! Kind of an adult version of the "Lion King". I feel a growl coming on myself! LOL! Thanks for sharing. WB

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Rachel for this delightful comment. Thanks for stopping by and reading my hubs.

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    Rachel Adams 6 years ago

    I loved your poem, beautiful.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you kashmir56 for your comment and compliment. I always write from my heart. I am glad you enjoyed it. I had a wonderful Christmas. Many blessings to you in the coming year.

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    Thomas Silvia 6 years ago from Massachusetts

    Hi Rhonda Waits, This poem is so awesome,it stimulates the mind with the emotions of love,such a grand love poem!

    Hope your Christmas Day was a super one and Wishing you all the best in the coming New Year!

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks rose56 for your comment and compliment. I always write from my heart.Thanks so much for stopping by my hubs.

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    rose56 6 years ago

    Excellent, and very touching. Good job.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Rosie for your comment. I always try to write from the heart. I use my life as my inspiration. Merry Christmas. Thanks for stopping by I always welcome your comments gf.

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    Rosie Rose 6 years ago from Toronto, Canada

    Oh Rhonda, this is just so romantic, so wild, so passionate, so sensuous, so beautiful.

    Merry Christmas gf,

    Rosie

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks Edna for your comment. I appreciate the compliment. I am looking at publishing my work right now. Thanks so much for your delightful comment.

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    Edna Lynard 6 years ago

    Wow. Such a beautiful poem once more. You should publish your work. Then the whole world could enjoy it.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you GstngRosePetals for your comment. Yes I couldn't agree more. I am engaged to be married and Eric is my inspiration for my poems. Thank you so much for your delightful comment. I plan on holding on to Eric forever. Have a Merry Christmas and a safe holiday.

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    GlstngRosePetals 6 years ago from Wouldn't You Like To Know

    Rhonda this is a very beautiful article and it's amazing to find love like this, it's a love that you never want to let go.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you kirutaye for your comment. Thanks for your compliment. I always welcome your comments. Thanks for the appreciation.

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    kirutaye 6 years ago from London, UK

    Perfect words:

    "I want to paint you my beauty! I want to capture your unchanged spirit. I want to capture your glory! I want to capture your soul! I want to put your beauty on canvas!"

    Thank you for sharing.

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thanks tinaz for your comment. Thanks for stopping by my hubs. I am flattered that you want to quote me, with your family and friends. Thanks for the appreciation.

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    tinaz 6 years ago

    That is really well written...I might quote you for some of my next friends or family birthdays...Thanks

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    Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

    Thank you Eric for your sweet comment. Thanks for stopping by my hubs.

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    Eric J. Musch 6 years ago

    Beautiful baby just beautiful. Wow. Some great writing.