Once upon a star

in the beauty of the night

I followed a path so far

with the guidence of the light.

I just kept walking

not knowing what I'd find

to myself i was talking

just to pass the time.

The air was so fresh

the time went so fast

a breeze ran through my dress

but it didn't seem to last.

I realized just how far i'd gone

but I couldn't turn around

so i just kept moving on

then suddenly i found

I was miles away from everyone

but, I didn't seem to care

though Im sure it would be more fun

if someone else was there.

VLH 1984

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IN2Deep 6 years ago Author

Thank you nighthag--happy to share the moment-glad you enjoyed

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nighthag 6 years ago from Australia

i liked this it had a lovely flow and made me stop and think for a moment, beautiful

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IN2Deep 6 years ago Author

Thank you Rosie--they are my deepest thoughts-my life-gad you enjoy them--HAPPY DAYS for you..

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Rosie2010 6 years ago from Toronto, Canada

Hiya in2deep, I enjoyed reading your poems. Thanks for sharing

Have a nice day,


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