Mindful Tree

In the long morning 

Shadows of tall buildings 

My thoughts and I strolled  

To a row of waterfalls pouring 

Into a pool that reflected 

The gentle bright sky 

On a weathered gray bench 

Breathing the fresh air of the new day 

Before the rush hour assault


To the water, my eyes closed 

For a moment 

After the moment 

My eyes opened 

Slowly focused 

A maple tree 

In front of me  

Silver gray bark  

Slowly I became 

Aware of the tree 

Planted at crossing paths 

Where many pass 

Gashes in its skin  

People on their way had left their mark 

Initials and hearts 


Of love, time and space 

Written with knives 

By those who cared nothing for the life 

Beneath, within 

Closing my eyes again 

The tree trunk glowed 

Golden as sunlight 

Pulsing with love of life 

Its only will

To grow 

As I sat in its shade it came to me 

The tree is completely at peace 

Bearing no grudge or even memory

Of thoughtless blades  

Wanting only to simply 


May you be at peace.
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scriber1 5 years ago

Explosively exquisite -- marked both by supple simplicity and mindful meandering. Thanks Tom

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Jewels 5 years ago from Australia

Lovely poem Tom. Trees bring awesome spaces of inspiration don't they. The space you created was as if the tree itself was the canopy over human frivolity, as if the tree was giving.

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Tom Rubenoff 5 years ago from United States Author

Thank you. When I opened my eyes it was if the tree had materialized there while my eyes had been closed. Up past its strong trunk its leaves spread so joyfully, soaking up the sun.

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is very inspirational. I never thought of a tree being injured by carving names. This is a one-of-a-kind and i enjoyed it immensely. Thank you.

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kimberlyslyrics 5 years ago

Indeed an eyeopener ans an inspiring delivery at that

now stop being creative or the rest of us have no chance 'K?

Thank yo


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RealHousewife 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Great poem:) You're right too - carving up a tree has always been romanticized - I've never really thought about it from the poor tree's point of view:)

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juneaukid 5 years ago from Denver, Colorado

Very nicely done with plenty for the reader's reflection.

c-bless 5 years ago

Beyond beautiful!! As I read, I felt I was in the presence of that maple tree.

Jaggedfrost 5 years ago

Well done. Thoughtful and restive.

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TheManWithNoPants 5 years ago from Tucson, Az.

Up, awesome and beautiful. Reminds me of something John Prine might write. (that's a compliment Tom.)


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ltfawkes 5 years ago from NE Ohio

Hi, Tom,

Beautiful language. I especially like:

Initials and hearts


Of love, time and space

Written with knives

Great irony. Nice job.


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alekhouse 5 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

Another one of your beautiful poems...Love it, Tom

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Tom Rubenoff 5 years ago from United States Author

Thank you. Lovely to see you :)

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alekhouse 5 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

Thanks, Tom...been down with viruses and extremely busy at the Inn. Trying to get back to writing. Love that many of you are now recording and posting readings of your poems.

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d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

Beautiful poem. Well written. And very emotionally stirring. Just a reminder of how much of nature is brutally ravaged for the sake of the almighty dollar. I guess i am just one of those hated "tree huggers" after all. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Tom Rubenoff 5 years ago from United States Author

Thank you. :)

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