My First Raise (limerick)

When I worked at neighborhood store

I told boss that I wanted more

So from job as clerk

I received his perk

To beggar who worked the front door


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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

My laugh for the day. Thank you!


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Oh well. Great laughs.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

You might actually make more money on the streets.

Look on the bright side.....NO TAXES!!


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

LOL....was that a promotion or demotion?


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

... and probably made more money!


dreamseeker2 3 years ago

You are so funny! Loved it! : ) Voted it up!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Ha! The penalty for speaking up. Funny as ever!


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

With that new promotion,

What could be sweeter?

You are now well trained

To be a WalMart greeter!


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Now that's a merciless boss.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

You got your raise all right, right out the door.


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ignugent17 3 years ago

That is an advantage. :-)

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